Reviews for Invisible Touch
Sparky She-Demon chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
OF COURSE it was Thor that found out for sure first! He's quite protective of Jane and Darcy! Complete misunderstanding though.
Sparky She-Demon chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Oh boy! Jane's getting suspicious. Steve is probably on to them, but I think he'd be the least upset with the situation.
ArodLoverus2001 chapter 4 . 5/20/2014
Awe cute story! Maybe there could be a sequel? Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
Love the ending! :)
TherSia chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
Is there sequel to this?
ArrowsIronJr chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
OH MY GOD. this is amazing. Please consider making a sequel. PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP
jenefaner chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
I liked It!
CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 4 . 4/14/2013
omg this was an epic ending :D
Shades-Soul chapter 4 . 4/5/2013
subMy god...I thought have army uncle, black belt cousins, two older brothers and a couple of step-fathers was scary. XD Just thinking of having to ask a immortal god and a super soldier for their sisters hand in marriage...yeah poor Barton. I already fixing his headstone. Now I wonder if he will ask tony to borrow the Iron Man suit when she actually does become pregnant...'

Please don't allow Thor in range of Darcy's screams while giving birth. He might actually see through with the threats all wives give their husbands. -innocent look-
assantra chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
I enjoyed this it was very cute and a little round the elbow to get to the thumb but still very much worth the read.
That Was A Helluva Thing chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
Aw! This was so sweet! I love big brothers Steve and Thor :)
8. B. R. Adford chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
Cute and Funny, a bundle of awesome...thanks for the entertainment :)
tone death chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
That last bit cracked me up.
HooksGirl67 chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Love this! Awesome story!
Harm Marie chapter 4 . 11/16/2012
Liked this.
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