Reviews for Splinters, Part 1: Divided
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 24 . 1/12/2013
Awesome chapter. I still feel bad for the dexowners, by the way what became of Green?
Sapphire must have been holding herself in to not kill the guy. I guess she's going through the worst together with Pearl.
Rukia Siry chapter 24 . 1/11/2013
Good work on the last chapter, I'm definitely looking forward to the next :)
I do think Sapphire's accent is a bit overkill, but that's mostly personal opinion.
YellowSaphfan69 chapter 23 . 12/19/2012
Sniff Sniff... Still recovering from the Ruby incident...

The guy at the meeting has very good persuasive skills. He convinced them that the dex holders were bad! And the gym leaders! NOOOOO! XD

Heh I laughed when Gold said "I like this thing" Nice! :D

Please update again soon! :P I must read more!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 23 . 12/19/2012
I didn't see that coming. Very smart plan to save their friends that way. Too fool your enemies you have to fool your friends. How were they able to get caught that fast by the association, or is it team Rocket attacking them?
Dark-Key0 chapter 23 . 12/18/2012
Yes! The three are ok! Now to deal with the Association vote. I wanna bet it'll all go down the drain from here! Hope Sapphire. Blue, and Silver are alright though they matter too.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 22 . 12/13/2012
I knew those three should have escaped the hospital before it was too late. Now they have to find a way how to escape the association. Maybe with the help of the other dexowners, but it still won't be an easy feat. I cant wait for the next chapter keep up with the good work.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 21 . 12/13/2012
This really sucks for them all. Having lost a friend, just because of some selfish bastards. The Pokemon association reminds me now of the Shinra company from FF7. What they have done to stay in power. Anyway let's hope Sapphire will get her spirit back quickly.
Dark-Key0 chapter 22 . 12/12/2012
No.. Not the Sinnoh Trio! They're too interesting to be taken by those foolish Association Fools!
Rukia Siry chapter 22 . 12/12/2012
Woohoo, cliffhanger! xD I have this mental image of Red and the others crashing their trial right in the middle. Fantastic job with this chapter, but I'm wondering: Are a number of the dexholders already pokemon league champions of their regions? If so, then I feel like instead of referring to them all just as "dexholders", it should be mentioned that some of them are Champions. This is just personal opinion. But really, I can't wait for the next chapter!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 20 . 12/4/2012
So things are getting worse by the minute. I really hope all the dexowners will team up again and that Sapphire's anger won't end up killing herself. I feel so sorry for them, but well things like that happen. So for me the honor to wait for the next chapter :D
YellowSaphfan69 chapter 19 . 12/1/2012
No no... RUBY!

Looks like Red is going down too!

But THAT'S WHAT MAKES YA AN AWESOME AUTHOR!

CAN'T WAIT TILL YA UPDATE AGAIN! :D :D :D :D
POKESPE-FAN chapter 19 . 11/30/2012
NOOOOOO! RUBY!

THE FRANTIC-NESS... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

.. AND Red...

Hurry! Update soon!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 19 . 11/30/2012
NOOOO RUBY! He can't die! It's too soon . He didn't even had the chance to do couple stuff with Sapphire.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 18 . 11/28/2012
Oh oh, Ruby! Did someone from the association stabbed him or form Team Rocket... I don't think team Rocket would stab Ruby... and what about Sapphire? I wanna know what happens next XD.
POKESPE-FAN chapter 17 . 11/24/2012
Time for the dexholders to confront each other! Well at least meet!

They really seem like they are gonna break under the pressure!
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Update soon!
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