|Reviews for Until My Heart Stops Beating|
| JacobB'sImprintee chapter 32 . 10/1/2012
It's about time.
| JacobB'sImprintee chapter 29 . 10/1/2012
Noooo. Bella was going to tell Jacob. Darn you, May.
| LCB chapter 32 . 10/1/2012
May is better!
| LCB chapter 31 . 10/1/2012
Bella is crazy she deserves Ed.
| LCB chapter 30 . 10/1/2012
Hypnotic vamps! How will it work once he turns her. Not very well!
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 32 . 10/1/2012
This better work out. If it doesn't, I'll shoot myself in the foot. I still want Bella to die but at least Jake might kiss her hard before she goes. ;D
Btw, if I'm correct, then this is the 100th review! Haha, I got the 1st review and the 100th. I feel speeeeshuuull. Love this story!
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 31 . 10/1/2012
Damn, I thought she was gonna kiss him or something. This hurts. I know I say that phrase too much. SO MUCH TENSION.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 30 . 10/1/2012
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand Edward's gonna butt in. I can feel it. Fucking bloodsuckers.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 29 . 10/1/2012
THIS IS TORTURE, WOMAN.
| EvyxxChan chapter 32 . 10/1/2012
Say its not a dream or day dream. Let it be real! Did she seriously just admit it?! :D
| kissa621 chapter 32 . 10/1/2012
Wait... is that...? I think it is! Its the light at the end of the tunnel! Hallelujah! Finally!
| EvyxxChan chapter 31 . 10/1/2012
I meant to say that was a good chapter for the previous chapter. And I no longer feel the essence of the story. Its kinda dragging. But I'm rooting for ya to make it better since this is ur first fic. U r a good writer. We all need improvements though. :3
| hieisdragonfly69 chapter 30 . 10/1/2012
damn i hope bella acts out. any one would. you are so rght about bd i was pissed at the damn book. sigh. great work an i cant wait till you update again my friend! keep up the good work! .
| ae81 chapter 30 . 10/1/2012
Not trying too be mean or anything but you're Jacob and Bella seems hella immature with the back and forth. An the Jacob/May storyline is horrible I mean how can Jake be hurt in one chapter over Bella but the next chapter be completely fine too the point where is he kissing May.
| kissa621 chapter 30 . 10/1/2012
This fic is starting to wear me down. And not in the best way. Im sorry sweets, I was really enjoying this at first but with the last several chapters you bring us to the brink of something good happening only to tear us down. Its kind of an emotional roller coaster with no relief. Where's the good? Wheres the promise? What's the point in continuing? Im just trying to say that we need a glimpse of the light at the end of the tunnel otherwise I feel like all this growth between the characters was for naught. Shouldn't Jake and Bella be better at communicating at this point?
Jake and May being a contrast between Bella and Jake was fun however now I feel as though they are the catalyst keeping Jake and Bella apart. Which is no bueno. Im really finding it difficult to like May now.
I also still don't understand Jakes reasoning in backing off from Edward and Bella when he knows its the supernatural element keeping her enchanted with Edward. Shouldn't he be fighting that much harder to keep her safe? It's seems more like he's offering Bella up on a silver platter to be turned which can't be right if he LOVES her.
I see your point that Jake is so wonderful that people should be falling at his feet but I almost
think that this 'stronger because he's walking away' version of Jake isn't as full of heart as canon Jake. Which makes me sad.