|Reviews for Caprice|
| Rize chapter 16 . 4/8
That chapter was just so perfect.
I, again, loved the smut sooo much. The fingering was just unbelievable hot and I can totally understand why Kid felt satisfaction just by reading that part over and over again. I find the way you describe possessive Kid just so very attractive while keeping him and Trafalgar still in-character. The cunning of Trafalgar is both impressive and so very fitting to his character. Extra Kudos for you just because in-character describtions shouldn't be taken for granted in the fandom.
And may I just add how hilarious the second half of the chapter was? My favourite part (outside of the Kidlaw smut scenes, which honestly take the cake) of this fic would probably be "as they made their obscenely graceful exit". And the phrase "Dr. Trafalgar had once again escaped from his clutches, and rather fashionably at that." I literally laughed out loud. (Good thing I was alone while reading this or I would have gotten strange looks, because I was just so thrilled and giddy while reading this. ) I already read all available chapters at this point, but sometimes I just return to this fic for this magnificient chapter.
I know it's been quite some time since you update, but I have to say that this is probably my favourite fiction of yours. I'd really appreciate a continuation.
| Rize chapter 14 . 4/8
This...was simply beutiful. I felt so excited and absolutely loved the hot Kidlaw smut scene.
| dance of the angels chapter 19 . 11/1/2015
Hey, I've like reread your story like 5 times and it's really one of my favorites! But already a year has passed since the last update... are you going to continue it? I really hope you do!
| Comiclz chapter 19 . 7/6/2015
This is so amazing i hope you update it soon. I love it so much I'm going to cry
| Shiina Yuki chapter 18 . 6/20/2015
I just reread this fanfic and my favorite scene is the fountain scene and this. There's no words that can measure how much I love this chapter! I can't thank you enough for writing this amazing story!
| Cat Avatar for the DCG chapter 6 . 4/28/2015
Your spell checker has done you no favors, here. Or maybe you "write" using voice dictation? Whichever, I have a couple more word replacements that crept in.
"Bridal" instead of "bridle," "amide" instead of "amid."
| Cat Avatar for the DCG chapter 5 . 4/28/2015
More word mixups- "aide" (the person) instead of "aid" (the act.)
Thank you for writing!
| Cat Avatar for the DCG chapter 3 . 4/28/2015
I noticed this last time I read this- and you may never return to this story to fix it- but several times, in this chapter and others, "peasants" (common folk) is given as "pheasants" (long-tailed game birds.)
I tend to snicker when I read it, but since it is almost certainly an error, I thought I'd report it.
Thanks for writing!
| Angelazzy chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY...GOD ITS GOOD. I just love your depictions of Law and Kidd. You're an amazing writer XD I can't wait to read the rest!
| lonelypencilcollection chapter 18 . 11/24/2014
This is really good. At first I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I love it now. You are a very talented writer. Please keep the story going. Sincerely LPC
| Mad Y u e chapter 19 . 11/16/2014
This is so interesting as the same as hot and more interesting (?)
i want to continue reading this amazing storye uvu
Thank you for writing and sharing this
I hope you'll update some day xd
| Mad Y u e chapter 11 . 11/16/2014
Oh, yes. I really like thissss 3333
Monsters, Accion, Gentelmens(?), Humor, its perfect!
I love the way you write it asdsadsad i don't even know why
I want to see Ace's dark side(?) And i'm curious about Marco being a phoenix or what an asdhakjshdsakdj i like everything
Too bad i'm going to catch up the story by tomorrow noon xd
Its kind of interesting 'cuz i don't really like KiddxLaw, but with the two stories that i've read of them (this and Forbbiden Fruits) i'm starting to like it 8)
Thank you for writing and sharing this /o/
| Tiffany.J Chan chapter 18 . 10/10/2014
I adore this! It's just too PERFECT N FUCKING ADORABLE 4 words! XD I can feel the Kidlaw ship setting in gear for this chapter! *Smiles like an idiot* N plz, plz, plz, plz, PLEASE update soon! No pressure, but I just simply ︎ this TOO MUCH!
| x.Orange.Chupa.x chapter 19 . 9/5/2014
Simply amazing! I just found this fic a while ago and enjoyed reading up to the latest chapter. I love the way how you mixed in demon-lore(?) and canon characters so that they seemed perfectly natural in the setting of the story. I can tell you really put a lot of effort into everything, and I really look forward to seeing how things will fold out! Especially between Ace and Marco. Even though the main pairig is KiddLaw, AceMarco is just as intriguing, in my opinion. They're just so...how should I say this...I really like how I can see the way their relationship is growing and changing. Not to mention that Ace and Marco are just so sweet together! :D
Again, I look forward to finding out how the rest of the story will go! :)
Really enjoyed this!
| Shiina Yuki chapter 19 . 8/18/2014
please update! Thank you!