Reviews for The Rise of Demons
Monster King chapter 9 . 2/23
Great story I really liked it a lot shame that it looks like you gave up on it.
my 2 guys chapter 9 . 1/22
that was good keep the chapters coming
Polaruspax chapter 3 . 11/26/2016
Yep sorry but your overused ideas are getting very boring and to easy to predict what will happen in your overused story! you need to be more original and stop coping others ideas like every other fuck boi on this site! :D
Polaruspax chapter 2 . 11/26/2016
The only problem I have so far is that you used that fucking overused shit of anko being their teacher of 2 random fucktards and naruto... like why can someone be original and fuck up the teams from canon... and let me guess she this is going to be a harem of 15 other people with naruto and anko will be a part of it wow that was hard to think of...
Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
Maybe you should edit this? The Hokage didnt ask about the Kyuubi, he still thinks its a evil monster hellbent on destruction, its hard for me to imagine him leaving Naruto alone with that.
arinasution5 chapter 5 . 7/23/2016
Hm
Nihatclodra chapter 2 . 6/27/2016
This is rushed to all hell and is showing all the signs of Gary-studom...
The Devils Bleeding Crown chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
This is dumb as fuck. Naruto is in the Academy by this point. He may not be good with academics, but he was good in taijutsu spars. Better than any civilian kid. That mob never would have caught him, and if they did, he wouldn't have been overpowered by the civilian.
covain chapter 9 . 2/3/2016
More chapters please
Korog the Oversoul chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Love it,
Guest chapter 7 . 8/20/2015
Please update soon
Druski101 chapter 5 . 6/6/2015
Will rei be apart of the harem
Guest chapter 9 . 6/2/2015
Excuse me, will you ever finish this Fanfic, because I think it is a amazing and beautiful story and I love to see it finished. P.S. Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
since you have no respect for anothers work ill sure as hell not respect yours you fucking talentless moron...
shit like you deserves no respect at all
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
your a sadistic moronic asshole and not evan acurate at all to the naruto universe this crap about fox hunts is the biggest and most overused shit in fanfiction its pathetic, tell me one episode or manga issue that show said fox hunts? there are none for 1 they were to afraid of him second no one goes agaist the hokages orders unless your a traitor like the villans of the show, third naruto himself said contless times his mistreatment was rarely phisical and more of that of neglect and abandonment.
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