Reviews for Payback
Rainey chapter 13 . 3/28/2014
I just came upon this story recently and I thought it was great. Very exciting and lots of action and, of course, bromance.
ElSaTa chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
just found this story today. Loved it. Great story
Art33mis chapter 13 . 10/25/2012
Oh, i felt a little sad when i saw 'This is the final chapter' cause i have followed this story from the beginning, and now it's over? Please tell Me that youre writing a new one? :D cause i have totally loved this!
tiggrr527 chapter 13 . 10/17/2012
Great wrap up this wonderful story! Can't wait for the the next adventure! Thanks for sharing!
jlopie chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
Very nice story! Scary for a while, there, but ultimately, a sweet story of love, brotherhood and Ohana! Thank you! Looking forward to your next H50 story!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
Wonderful! I love it!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
I really enjoyed Steve having Grace there. Loved the whole story.
cytpotter chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
:D Great Story! I loved the action and the whump! Great Job! Thanks for the wonderful read!
Qweb chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
Nice finale. The true meaning of Ohana.
cytpotter chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
Man when you whump a SEAL you really whump one! ;) Great story! Enjoying it alot! Now on to the next chapter!
maggiemcgarrett chapter 13 . 10/16/2012
great story as all your stories are. thanks for writing and sharing with us. looking forward to the next one x
HelenBeacham chapter 13 . 10/15/2012
And please, keep on writing. Your stories inspire ME to write.
lynnrxgal chapter 13 . 10/15/2012
Great story! I'm always a bit disappointed when they end, but I sure did enjoy every chapter!
plws chapter 13 . 10/15/2012
I loved this story. Thanks
Kilema chapter 13 . 10/15/2012
Thank you so much for sharing this great story. Hope to see you soon with a new story. Thank you again
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