|Reviews for Shattered Resplendence|
| RedAmaranth chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Ah! I've been wondering where you've been! *says the one reviewing months later*
I love that you explored Riza's insecurity about possibly never being able to be intimate with anyone. That's huge for any woman, especially a girl coming into womanhood. And little Roy being at a loss for words around her yet again. Perfect :) His sincerity really shone through with his last bit of dialogue.
I really love how this just took their relationship two steps ahead and neither one is really ready for it. The line "What a fine mess they were in now." really conveys that! At least to me.
Can't wait to read more from you! Welcome back : )
| Lou Nebin chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Welcome back, Jack. ( Did that on purpose) I was afraid you had died, we've missed you and your amazing stories on here! I especially like this one because it addresses that issue that every single one of us has. Hopefully we'll get to see more from you, once again. I, myself, have been in a writing slump lately and I'm hoping this year's Big Bang will draw me out of it. Your easy bounce-back has certainly inspired me. :D
| Lain-san chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
You're a Computer Science major and write the finest Royai fanfiction I've seen, that's awesome xD Would you happen to have a tumblr? I would like to follow you :)