|Reviews for Senses Lost|
| Katz4 chapter 8 . 8/14/2014
That "..Shadow as harmless as a frightened kitten..." XD haha oh I loved that, the whole paragraph it was hilarious! And accurate IMO
| Katz4 chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
I really liked this story! It was fairly short and simple, but the characterization was good, and you couldn't guess everything that was going to happen before it did. I mean, I liked the plot.
The last chapter was by far my favorite, partly because I just enjoy seeing everything going alright for our heroes again after a trying day. I especially enjoyed Shadow's reactions to Tails' 'dying.' I really liked that little scene with Sonic telling the scientists about their adventure, I could just imagine him excitedly rambling on and on, and I really liked how he emphasized Tails' part. That "He was so badass...!" line was oddly sweet with how proud Sonic sounded and was delivered really well!
Mostly, I really liked how this story put Sonic through tough times without going overboard with it. A lot of fanfiction describes prolonged tortures, but you did it in a believable way that didn't go into a lot of detail. I don't know if that really makes any sense. I think I mean I liked that there wasn't a whole lot of violence of sadistic stuff. Not that other fanfictions can't do that, but it was nice to read something that didn't for a change!
Eggman's plan was really, well, cliché, and not really well thought through, regardless. But since when have any of his plans ever been well thought through! I'm just glad he was still able to be a reasonable threat for our heroes.
I also liked the beginning with Sonic going with Tails to the convention, despite not wanting to. Sonic and Tails were really good in this.
Everyone had a role to play in this, except maybe Rouge. After breaking Sonic out, I'm not sure what she was trying to accomplish by hiding. Maybe it was part of a plan that she never got to put into motion? Oh well, it was realistic enough, and besides being a little confused, it didn't actually bother me.
Okay, this review is more than long enough, but one more question. Why isn't it's status labeled as Complete?
| PrinceyAtNight28 chapter 10 . 7/12/2014
One of the best stories ive read in a long time! Very nice! Its hard to find an original story like this with such good content nowadays.
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
This was a good solid end to the story. Though, I would liked a bit more action regarding the stopping of Eggman. I still say that Tails, whether he is younger than Sonic or not, should have grounded him or unleashed the fury of 7000 righteous suns on him. Overall, I say this story was pretty good, despite some OOC moments mostly on Sonic's part. I look forward to any other stories you have to offer.
From a Watching Reader.
P.S Nice to see Tails get some heroic recognition.
| T.M Veganstroth chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
It is definitely worth a read! It had me thinking a lot yesterday about how sometimes we take our senses for granted, and what we might do in Sonic's situation. One of the most thought provoking fan fics I've read in a long time! Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOU for writing this!
| pokemonpuck chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
Wow. Just, Wow. I loved every second of this fanfiction. You have amazing work. I have checked out your other stories, and they are awesome.
Keep up the great work! And by the way; the last chapter wasn't rushed at all. It was perfect.
| RAWN89 chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
I love this story! I really enjoyed reading it ;D
It was really well written, had great suspense (I was truly worried for the heroes several times), and it was a very cute and funny ending :3
Please do continue writing stories like this, 'cause I definetely would be eager to read whatever your marvelous imagination can come up with ;)
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/2/2012
I like the action in this chapter, it flowed pretty well here. I wonder what will be the final thing that will get Sonic's hearing back. Poor Tails, all the trouble he went through and he's relegated to tech duty. "Sigh."
Still hoping for a good climax.
From a Watching Reader
| Yamiii chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
This story is looking pretty cool so far and it's well written. :)
The whole "rodent" thing - I know exactly how you feel when you see someone call Sonic a rodent. I knew that he wasn't one because of these two animal encyclopedias I have, but I didn't know the genetic specifics. That's pretty awesome. :D
And I'm glad that someone else shares the knowledge that Sonic knows a hell of a lot more than people think. XD
| RAWN89 chapter 9 . 11/2/2012
Great cliffhanger! Nice to see that I'm not the only one fond of torturing poor readers with these X)
Can't wait for the next chapter XD I hope Tails will be ok o.O
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/25/2012
And the adventures of Sonic the Dumbass continue. Man, he's just being a load right now to Shadow and Rouge, Why did they let him tag along again? Oh well, at least Tails has finally made it to the base. It feels like the story drawing to a close soon. So keep up the good work.
From a Watching Reader
| RAWN89 chapter 8 . 10/25/2012
This is so great and fun to read, I can't wait 'til next chapter XD
I hope he'll regain his hearing again!
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/18/2012
For the Lord's Swiss cheese, just f*cking leave Sonic! Why do you feel the need to possibly kill yourself?! Man, Rouge really should have just resorted to giving him a dope kick to the head and thrown his silly ass out, seriously.
P.S. Good chapter.
From a Watching Reader
| Swan7 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
| RAWN89 chapter 7 . 10/18/2012
Yesss, I had hoped Rouge would show up to help :D this is getting so good, I hope Sonic gets his revenge X)
Can't wait for next chapter XD
No DA? Aww :( but your pic looked so good...please let me know if you change your mind and get one kay? I'll definitely fave it ;D