|Reviews for Lost City in the Sands|
| f.tastarossa chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
Whoaaa please update!
| f.tastarossa chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
Gahhh im so excited XD
| Kittenklaws13 chapter 9 . 9/11/2013
This is all very cool, but I think that you need a proofreader. Love the plot. I always liked the idea of Natsu with a secret.
| Rikkai and hyotei lover chapter 9 . 7/24/2013
finally after all this time you updated yay!
| kai chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I choose nalu and gruvia
| Tla chapter 8 . 2/27/2013
updte soon please nature
Lolli( I'm not logged in)
| mustdelete chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
Cliff hanger *huffs in annoyance*
Excited to read what's coming next!
| mustdelete chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
xD Little Natsu and Igneel are too cute when they bicker .
| mustdelete chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
This is a cool idea! Pumped to see why Natsu knows about Yuhi when the others don't.
| CactusJuiceLoopy chapter 8 . 12/19/2012
WHY A CLIFF HANGER!? DON'T YOU KNOW CLIFFY'S ARE BAD! (TToTT)
| Rikkai and hyotei lover chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
what!? natsu has a brother!?
| ryleanette chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
Love it n want to read the next chapter cuz it's getting interesting
| ahuna67 chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
Great chapter but sometimes you spell wrong. But it's interesting and it has a good story.
| Akane Izo chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
ooooohh- i like where thi is goinghaha.. i hope there'd be more action later... whahhahahah! i just made updates quicker! LOL. i cant wait for the next
| The Lollipop Assassin chapter 7 . 11/22/2012
WRITE CHAPTER 8 AS SOON AS POSSIBLE OR I MIGHT GO CRAZY... er FROM THE WAIT!
Nice cliffie by the way:-)