Reviews for double trouple
Guest chapter 15 . 2/16/2013
What happened with the cook vs. Cook who win
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
Poor Marco is going to be in a load of trouble as well as poor Whittney.
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Oh my Brittney certainly found her "prince".
valeries26 chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
Poor, poor flaming turkey. He's afraid he gonna get kill for Thanksgiving Dinner by Thatch/Shanks.
mamc97nolongeranonymous chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
A girl! If you need a name how about Rini (eng little rabbit)?
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
S boy! Poor Marco Whittney is going to give him a heart attack.
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 10 . 1/22/2013
What will Whittney do? Poor Marco.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 6 . 10/5/2012
Donquixote Doflamingo?
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
I should have known...
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 10 . 10/5/2012
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 9 . 10/5/2012
How cute
SinAngel9 chapter 10 . 10/4/2012
not bad
Perhaps I can Fly chapter 9 . 10/3/2012
Hey there. I like where your story plot is kind of going, but sad to tell the truth, firstly, I think the relationships in this story don't really make much sense if you read it really fast. Secondly , your grammer and punctuation is slightly off, with several sentences not having enough commas in between them. Next, a little more description on the two OCs' attitude and personalities towards their environment, instead of a description of what they are wearing, would be good. The characters should have more reactions and emotions towards their surroundings, instead of just blushing and sweat-dropping. Following, I feel that some of the characters are really OOC, if you get what I mean. I like Marco very much, but I truly believe he does not act that way. Finally, just to inform you, the correct spelling is ' Zoro ' and not 'Zolo'. It really hurts me to see people spelling it the wrong way. I was wondering whether I could help edit your work, and bring to a greater height, or perhaps adopt the story, if you don't mind? I hope that you will continue to update this story though. It pretty well written.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Wow!Royal Pirate children.
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