Reviews for Mommy's Birthday Surprise
WolfChild111 chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Guppy. I'm very disappointed...this is not the fluff fest I wanted. They don't even kiss. It's funny I'll grant you but we don't find out what their presents were, bar Mori's, you misspell now as know (very annoying) and again with the flow factor. I understand it was a rewrite but... nope, I have no words. Sorry if this is harsh but I had high expectations of this fic and you and I'm just very disappointed. Never skimp on quality for a deadline honey, it creates this...mess. P.s. don't be dishearted, it does have good bits but it jars with the rest of the story. Pps. be glad I'm not mad anymore, this would have got you killed. Kidding xx Wolfie xx
WolfChild111 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
This is funny, Wolfie approves :) There are a couple of spelling errors (attacking/attaching) and there's a feel of something missing, the story flow isnt quite right. Other than that, it's good and whether you live or not is dependant on the fluff that had better be in the next chapter...no pressure
POPTARTS chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
Great job! So ... devious. Devil like. Impressive.
POPTARTS chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I love Ouran High School Host Club! This is why I am reading this. Mostly because it is for Kyoya-sempai. Great detail! I love long chapters! So should be longer, I mean this is just an idea in the best place ever!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Update the next chance you have free-time. I want to see the ending. Or else. You shall be smited by the power of my strawberry canon.