|Reviews for The return of the long lost|
| ncbexie25 chapter 4 . 4/10
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 4 . 10/2/2012
Awwwh!finally!haha,Sirius being scared if Remus remembers or not,that was cute!
| cherub21 chapter 4 . 10/1/2012
ewww yuck your stupid disgusting girly bottom Sirius is so terribly gross he Makes me want to vomit baaa!
your story is so awful and your sex scene is really shitty and poorly written,you suck!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
OOH!Myyy!That was a good one!I can't believe it took them so long!Gosh,boys!
| Beka Ca-Be chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
This is a really awesome story i want more! My only advice, pick up a beta reader. You have a few common mistakes that can be easily fixed. I'm open as a Beta right now and there are plenty more under the Beta Reader tab here on FF.
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
OOHHH!:D!Nice going with the boys here!Sweet moments too with some revelations of what's happened with Remus!
| howfuckingquaint chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This is pretty darn good old friend! Update it ffs! (and now you can read my stuff from the beginning, just so we're even, I know you want some femsmut. You crave it, don't you?)
Saknar dig bajs!/Emma
| KitanaVicca chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
wow! please do continue this one, I want to know how it ends!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
OOHH!Well well!this definitely is good,the idea behind it,the way Remus feels like he has to isolate himself from his friends and the world!Just a few mistakes in the use of words in some places but mostly it's perfectly written!Good going!