|Reviews for Trials for Joyce|
| TessHardingfan chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
I always did love the Spike moments when he pisses Glory off with the Bob Barker comment and that laugh oh his after she said he was lying lol
| spike'smate chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
poor spike now glory is torturing him
| S1r3h chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
Can't wait for Glory to get her a$$ kicked.
| sweetprincipale chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
Ooooh. Okay, first you do me proud with the detail work- the getting the second scan, the chagrined doctor, the fact that Spike had conveniently already left the house... perfection. The battle with the big snake was done so well, with the puzzled Anya, the need for a "disposal run" (may have to borrow that term, if I may?), and Xander's carpentry skills.
Loving this story, and kudos for getting your piece moving so well.
| sweetprincipale chapter 8 . 10/27/2012
Ahh, very nice way to develop things. And I don't recall if "Let the best me win." is script or just your brillance but I'll attribute it to you and say that was a perfect line. Buffy's speech of explanation to Dawn was so well done, and the minions reasonings are troublingly innaccurate but sound so probable. A good read and eagerly heading to the next.
| Spike is the BIG BAD chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
NO! It can not be the end of the chapter already! I love this way too much to have the chapter end. :) Guess you'll just have to update soon! I loooove this story!
Glory stinks. : I hope Spike is okay. Buffy better save him! I just know Dawn and Joyce are going to have to force her to.
I kinda wish Anya would date Giles. I can't help it, ever since "Tabula Rasa" I see them becoming a couple.
| spike'smate chapter 9 . 10/26/2012
glad the snakes dead and joyce didnt have to have the biopsy. and now glory thinks spikes the key...dont let him die please.
btw hope this is gonna be a long story trust me you will have a loyal reader cant wait for next chappie and YES u are doing it justice
| S1r3h chapter 9 . 10/26/2012
I've said it once, and I'll say it again.
| spike'smate chapter 8 . 10/22/2012
poor dawn talk about pressure
| Spike is the BIG BAD chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
Poor Spike! Glory's going to get him! And Buffy's a bitch! I want to bat her in the back of the head! Great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love how Angel was given the pink slip by the Powers That Be! He's such a jerk anyway. :P :) Update soon! I need more Spike fixes.
P.S. Hehe, you killed Riley. :))) I never ever liked Riley.
| S1r3h chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
Poor Spike Stupid Glory.
At least now we have an idea about the necklace.
| sweetprincipale chapter 7 . 10/19/2012
Another exciting chapter. I loved the Spike/Joyce bonding, and Giles' voice was very well done, as usual. My favorite little moment has to be Willow.
"The Powers took the key?" Willow's confusion was evident. "Was it an actual key? We had it? I didn't know we had a key! Did you know we had a key?" Willow turned to look at Xander, who could only shrug his shoulders in bewilderment.
I could hear it, see it, the cadence in the voice, the confused puppy look and the rapid almost stammer when she gets really excited and starts tossing out the questions.
Love the use of Maat. I'm always working in the old mythologies as well, and totally think it makes the story more believable than just "creating" a whole new god/goddess, whatever.(Although a well created one with some backstory is excellent, too!)
A nice somber ending note, the cap on the pen. So now everyone knows everything- what are they gonna do with it all?
| spike'smate chapter 7 . 10/17/2012
so dawns the key!
| S1r3h chapter 7 . 10/17/2012
Poor Scoobies. *Shakes Head*
One crisis after another. *Sighs*
| sweetprincipale chapter 6 . 10/15/2012
To begin with, a favorite, favorite line "Ah, yes. I must say I forgot about that." Buffy barely caught the mumbled 'I was trying to repress it' from Giles. And the second favorite has to be the last one. "What's with the family outing."
Okay, Speed Racer, you sped along here, but that's your style, I talk everything to death. Excellent work, getting more and more in depth, and you throw some curve balls- once which you think about they're no curves really. Riley's death and Glory's sudden emergence felt very unexpected, but believable. I liked how you helped Giles explain what was in Riley's head, and maybe Buffy won't be so self-destructive in her assessment of her self because of it.
I particularly like that Buffy WANTS to include Spike in the planning, not just the fighting. Sounds like we could have a good partnership starting.