|Reviews for a new meaning to life|
| c3lph t1tl3d chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Okay so she asks questions but you don't answer them. The paragraphs need to be spaced out more and you're jumping subjects. Also, you shouldn't give all the information away in the first paragraph.
You should have just said something like 4 billion years old instead of 4.55 "give or take a few hundred years" obviously if she's keeping track of the decimals in her age then she would have it down to the months. Just saying. This fic has good potential, but it needs to be cleaned up and the wrinkles need to be ironed out a bit.
| wolf-form18 chapter 9 . 10/13/2012
Okay so I find it's a good story but it's missing excitement, you know like an 'umph' but it's good.
Looking forward to reading more.
| wolf-form18 chapter 8 . 10/13/2012
Love how she killed all of them like they were nothing!
Good job :)
| wolf-form18 chapter 6 . 10/13/2012
We all know Jane is gonna win :P
| wolf-form18 chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
Good chapter. Waiting for something to go down though.
| wolf-form18 chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
Love how she doesn't give a damn.
| wolf-form18 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Great start! :)
| SUZITROUBLE chapter 8 . 9/28/2012
Here is a suggestion, have them go to Rhode Island during WaterFire (it is supposed to be like Venice Italy the canals.) Look up for information. If you have any questions after looking it up let me know.
| Awesome chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Plz update soon