|Reviews for Old man and the sea|
| Sartjd1 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I adore this. Its short but because of this it evokes a sort of unsettling haunting happiness that I can't quite accurately describe. I hope you'll write more like this in the future. I'd love to be able to read a series of short poetry alike to this but they seem to be extremely rare on here. Perhaps because they are very difficult to create, maybe? However I am fan of this. Its a rare jem, so please be motivated to create more :) Your very good at it.
| Visitkarte chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I can't believe I missed reviewing this. It's beautiful. Can't write more without revealing the story. Thank you.
| BabalooBlue chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Oh, very poetic. I like the simplicity.
As for content - I like that you've picked up on the freedom the bike gives House. I've always thought that was the main attraction (apart from the 'fast & dangerous' quality) of the bike for him.
| Harry Artemis Jackson chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Wow! Great, and you didn't clutter it with uneeded words. Beautiful.
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
| EpicProblem chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I like the simplicity of this. You managed to convey a very strong feeling with such few words. Bike Freedom. I enjoyed this. I like it indeed.