|Reviews for all the world's clichés|
| Basileya chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Ooooow no! Thet have to be together. Is going to be a second part? Where they get together? Pretty please? :D
| nessieblackfan chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Poor Lucy :( I want to hug her so bad right now.
| downstage chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I HATE THIS IT SUCKS AND I HATE IT AND YOU CAN'T RIP OUT MY HEART LIKE THIS NO ASFJKSALFHSKALHKLSHKLSAJKLJS AKLjkl
EMILY YOU BITCH
HE LOVES LUCY GAWD
/i swear i was expecting a happy ending dammit
i love this so much it's amazing
i love lucy, especially - the contrast of her personality is amazing, like she's still a dreamer at heart but things have gone wrong and so she's turned to smoking and drinking, and the conflict is just so amazing and so fleshed out and gah.
she's perfect, she's actually my exact lucy in characterisation and i can't. And i love that she can't differentiate between love and lust and I HATE THAT ALBUS DOESN'T LOVE HER BACK but it's also good because it's realistic and accurate
goddamn heartbreaking though
so beautifully written, i love how you work it in and bby lysander.
i don't know i just love this and also hate it because my poor heart and just they belong together and lkfashklsahas i'm sorry this review sucks it's your fault for making me believe it might get a happy ending and writing it so wonderfully only to crush my heart
her parents walking in must've been so damn awkward wowwww
albus is a douche i love him
i love this you hoe
| justalittle l o o n y chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I DON'T THINK THAT'S ALLOWED BECAUSE I'M DEAD NOW AND OW. your lucy was so perfect and edgy and i loved how she thought all of those things while they were happening, because that's how it goes, and asdfghjk i'm really not articulating well. i loved this so much. your albus, sigh, i think i fell in love with him a bit, because my image of him was just so great and he was so great and HELP MY STANDARDS OF REAL GUYS HAVE GONE FAR TOO HIGH BECAUSE OF FANFIC OOPS.
/let's count the run-on sentences
no, but, legit, i loved this so much. broke my heart in two, but i loved it. &hearts
p.s. this should happen on the rp yesyes lucyalbus secks
| sixdegreesofseperation chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I think you just made me like second-gen. :')