Reviews for Proceed With Caution
allysspadfoot chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
I love this!
Guest chapter 38 . 9/5/2015
Love the story! It flows very well and is engaging. You did a great job modernizing it.
QuicksilverWitch chapter 51 . 9/3/2015
Sooooo, just finished rewatching "Persuasion" and went on a fanfic kick. Found this story.


I just-the characterization! The emotions! The structure-ALL OF IT-so, so cool. Beautiful. Ugh. Keep up the absolutely fabulous writing; you have true talent! :D
CocoaCollidoscope chapter 51 . 5/22/2014
Nice story. Had fun reading it.
CocoaCollidoscope chapter 37 . 5/21/2014
hot damn... that was descriptive... :):):):)
Forbular chapter 51 . 5/11/2014
Just thought id say thanks for writing this. Ive got no work done all day because i kinda read the whole thing start to finish but i really enjoyed this and i really liked the way it was written you managed to get a lot of emotion across without needing to gush and it was really disarmingly in character and identifiable (not sure what that says about my mental health come to think of it but im pretty sure the ship called sanity sailed a long time ago so we wont worry)
Anyway after that random tangent just want to say that i really enjoyed this and i completely agree that LBD is awesome have you checked out emma approved (stupid question really your writing a persuasion fan fic and youve watched LBD of course you are) anyway its awesome & if you havent seen it watch it asap :)
Looking forward to whatever you write next xxxx
Michaella chapter 49 . 4/17/2014
I laughed reading your 5th paragraph (being one of those crazy Bible-thumpers myself). I always love any mention of us.
And there you go. I wasn't going to review (though I think this is a brilliant adaptation, I'm just lazy); the only reason you're reading this is because of one sentence that could just as easily been left out.
P. S. Kudos if you recognized the quote from the Gallagher Girls series.
ARDingbat chapter 51 . 1/22/2014
Can't stand guy Sebastian. but enjoyed the story thanks :) hard in a dairy format to not end it quickly so I think you did a good job building up to the finale anyway. Evermore now stuck in my head!
ARDingbat chapter 43 . 1/22/2014
Never sure if reviews years after the story was completed are worth it. But thought I'd just say that it's a good story, and I hope there is more of Fred talking coming up! Love the muller dress I think they look like mullets too! (Not so much when worn thankfully!)
Weave the Magic chapter 51 . 10/19/2013
Well... Everything worth extending (the romance of Frederick still longing for Anne) just happened in one chapter. That's a shame. I didn't get to know your Frederick. I know so much about Anne but not much insight of Frederick. He came across as someone who is not willing to take a chance even though he still loves. Lucy has been out of the picture, there wasn't any Mr. Elliot to challenge as another suitor, it's just the specter of a broken love affair that is stopping him - but the lady love is still very much available (and obviously gives him a despaired look or two). But still, he does nothing for a long time. So I am asking, does this Frederick love enough?
Weave the Magic chapter 46 . 10/19/2013
I bet Frederick remembered everything.. I like that Lucy is still a good friend.
Weave the Magic chapter 43 . 10/19/2013
But Frederick has done nothing to encourage Anne.!
Weave the Magic chapter 40 . 10/19/2013
What is Frederick's work? Seems like he has a lot of free time.
Weave the Magic chapter 38 . 10/19/2013
I sure hope there is a good reason why Frederick is as 'blank' even after this length of being in each others presence.
Weave the Magic chapter 36 . 10/19/2013
And still Frederick did not even bother to dance with Anne? I will be so surprised that Frederick is still in love with her coz I just don't see any evidence.
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