Reviews for you're in my veins
airzy7 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
That was beautiful. I loved the slow, intimate touches between them and I could see the lights from New York shining through the window. I imagine her just lying on top of him, fingers intertwined and noses touching (and eskimo kissing) and slow, light kisses. This moment seems perfect in my mind for them, and I have to say this was a nice change from the smut I have seen (and I have to admit sometimes I have written) where its heavy, and details about them having sex. Though there were no details or moans of their orgasms, it didn't need it, this story is special and extremely beautiful. You did an amazing job!
jesss chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
stop switching tenses, otherwise it was good.
SweettFace chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
anhhhh that was hott!
MaddElise chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Great first chapter!
I wanted you check out whoever's fics you recommended up the top, but the name isn't there lol
eternalLove59 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Oh it was definitely sweet but also sexy as hell.
imogenew chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This was so good! Can't wait till you update! x
Kdmr87 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
wow that was good!
gleek06216 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
awesome as always babe :) love you're writing for them :)
folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 9/24/2012

okay, so can I just say, I envy your ability to write smut. omfg. you managed to make it so classy, even though, well, they were having sex on the floor of a dance studio. and just the way you worded everything. i didn't feel like i was reading porn - i felt like i was watching a very, very good sex scene in a movie. this was amazing, as always.

i really loved it, and omg it was just so great. and all the cute rachel/brody and finn, ugh i just wanted to punch him. and don't even get me started on Bitch Blonde with the cream.

but no, brody had sex with rachel, not bitch blonde, so all is good in the world.

;) amazing job! thank you so much for the dedication and kind words. :) xxx
Phoenix South chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
I want that to happen in the show was so beautiful!
BriyerRose chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Loved it! :-)