Reviews for A Single Step
Frumious-Bandersnatch-46 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Interesting aftermath to the "First Contact" movie.
Well done!
MirielOfGisborne chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
I like this story a lot. I think you capture the characters of Zefram and Lily very well. They've certainly got their no-nonsense personality about them.
Their courage in the face of illness is admirable, and the moment when Lily passes away is very sensitive and honest, but at the same time it's not heart-wrenching. You get a sense that this is all part of life, which it is, but it's not always easy to see things that way. So I love the fact that Lily treats this moment as if it's just a temporary separation, and not an absolute ending.
As for M'Roan, he's adorable, if you'll allow that epithet. He just seems like a good friend to have. And I assume you chose the name because it mimics a sound that cats make sometimes? My cat always 'mroans' instead of meows. Ever since she had kittens, she keeps making that sound whenever she wants to endear herself to me.
Well, anyway, very nice story!
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Great one-shot. :)