Reviews for Until She Wakes
Imrryr chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I don't get out to visit Creepy Town too often (the place unsettles me for some reason), but I really liked the way you got into Celes' head here, and the writing was, as usual, superb. Melding her regrets over past deeds with Rachel's dead-but-not-quite visage was an excellent idea.
NephandiMan chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Masterful. From the pen of a lesser author, the repetition at the end would have seemed like the detritus of a failure to edit, but in your consummately-skilled hands, it suggests the horrifying possibility that Celes' premonition of losing her mind is coming true - perhaps already has - and that no promise, and no journey, will allow her to escape the basement where Rachel waits... with cold hands.