|Reviews for Cleverly Planned Coincidences|
| Forbidden Moons chapter 1 . 7/12
I'm really dissatisfied with how Jackson tripped himself on the floor several times and lost easily to a girl with no training XD Anyway, this seems intriguing ehehe~
| Jotunori chapter 25 . 4/14
First things first:
I'm really really really happy that I stumbled across your story and I'm also glad that I found such a good one about a character that isn't that famous (And I don't like the Lisa/Jackson ship) . But I loved Murphy in Red Eye and seriously, who didn't thought that he was hot as fuck as the psychopath Jackson Rippner?
So I've read your whole story and wanted to give you a detailed review!
The description of your story caught my interest in an instant. She was very fitting and made me very curious, but I knew that the beginning would be very alike to the content of the movie. That wasn't a bad desicion from you to set it up like this, because I think that all of his missions are very alike to each other from the order of events. I liked the train scenario very much.
I celebrated that you wrote a toilet scene with him 'mentioning having a quickie' (I dunno how the exact quote his, because I'm german and in the german version Rippner just states "Well, thanks for that quickie." and leaves while fixing his hair - The "Whoops there go my panties!"- moment ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) )
Also I really liked the dynamic between Amelia (shit, that's a fucking beautiful name!) and Jackson. The character and relationship development between those two were perfect, in my opinion. It was a complete and whole package that I enjoyed to read!
Now to some (not that) negative things.
I would have wished for an ending that isn't that abrupt and I was really sad at this story came to an end even if it's almost three years old. Maybe another epilogue chapter with a few more informations about how their life is now after Amelia's pregnancy. I would've loved some Jackson and Baby stuff at the end.
So to summarise this I really really enjoyed reading it and I can't stop to point out how much I love this story. Keep up your work on writing such good stories! I'll reading some of your others for sure! :)
Hope you have a lovely day or night! (Here it's nighttime :'D)
| BorchMadsen chapter 25 . 10/4/2014
Well, I have to say this is by far one of the best Red Eye fanfictions I've read! Even though I am a Jackson/Lisa shipper, this was the most perfect fanfiction! :) I wish it had been longer ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
| ChloeB18 chapter 25 . 12/30/2013
I just started reading this last night and I had to force myself to get some sleep by the time I reached Chapter 10 but when I woke up today I glued myself right back to this story once again. I've just finished it and I have to say this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. :D And I absolutely loved the movie. Maybe you could make another Red Eye story sometime in the future? :D I know I'd love to read another!
| trudes193 chapter 25 . 12/14/2013
I'm glad Amelia got to speak to her parents before faking her death, and that she and Jackson got a happy ending. :D
Thank you for writing this story, I'm upset it has ended but happy that everything turned out okay. :D
| teamrosalie21137 chapter 25 . 12/14/2013
Aw! I love the ending! :D
| CuteSango07 chapter 25 . 12/13/2013
I loved the ending - sad because she had to leave her parents, but it was the right thing to do.
They can now live in peace, away from all of the bad guys and raise their child together.
| trudes193 chapter 24 . 12/13/2013
What a cliffe, I'm glad he finally told told her he loves her. I think the fake death would work, her parents are too pissed off with her disappearing to care right now, and she can always talk to them when everything has calmed down. But it is a good idea, and I'm excited for the next chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. :D
| CuteSango07 chapter 24 . 12/12/2013
He finally told her that he loves her! Woot! Go Jackson!
The fake death thing sounds like a pretty good idea if ya ask me. She left her parents, so I'm sure they don't really care at this point - though really, they probably do they're just too pissed right now - so I guess the plan would work. :/ I guess I'll find out soon enough.
| teamrosalie21137 chapter 24 . 12/12/2013
Ahahahahahah! Will she say it back? DUN DUN DUN! :D
| trudes193 chapter 23 . 12/12/2013
Yay he admitted he loves her, I hope everybody comes out of this safely, and cannot wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter I hope it is a happy ending. :D
| starrysky7 chapter 23 . 12/11/2013
I really hope he survives, I really like them together. Loves this chapter and can't wait until the next update.
| CuteSango07 chapter 23 . 12/11/2013
Mwhahahahahaha! He's finally telling people that he loves her and that he wanted to tell her that he loved her as well. Woot woot! But poor thing, having to deal with a baby and now her lover has gone and gotten himself shot! *rolls eyes* He'll be okay though. Everything will be fine in the end... hopefully.
Lovely chapter mah dearie!
| starrysky7 chapter 22 . 11/21/2013
Love this story and really want you to continue. Please update soon.