|Reviews for Repairs|
| DesertSandBox chapter 2 . 1/16
will you ever update this?
| DesertSandBox chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
When will you update cant wait til you do again
| jabbarulez chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
it'll be interesting to see how they survived in the core
| qingbest chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
Very interesting, however what type of story/episode are you trying to write? I believe one that involves us trying to imagine what is there since there is no description of the planet what-so-ever
| badkidoh chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Well I like it so far.
| supp chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
We need this story keep it up. Good start but... stretch out the fun revealing stuff like solutions... feel the story when you get to those parts.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I kinda like it too. You have a good idea there and I'd like to see more of it.
I did find the script style a little odd though; and the part where you have 'People' gives me the image of a crowd all speaking in unison like the crowd scenes in Monty Python's 'Life of Brian' (give it a google, there's probably a clip on youtube).
Anyway, it's a nice idea that would benefit from being fleshed out a bit. Good luck with it.
| james chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
hi that was very good but you may of solved to meany thing to fast but please write more .
| DesertSandBox chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I think you should keep writing this story i like it