Reviews for Rebellion
Ersatz Einstein chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
You had some technical errors ("but, this was different," "assumed as," etc.) and awkward/off-putting phrasing ("any movement too fast," "utter crap"). The ending was surprising and original. You blended the memory with the moment well, communicating the similarity in feeling.
Twin4'soldaccounthackedtoomuch chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
AWESOME STORY CONTINUE IT! POR FAVOR?
skyspottedshadow chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Nicely written, and interesting. And about writing only American history...I know how you feel, fellow American!