Love the story so far 3 Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work

Amazing chapter, can't wait for the next chapter.

You need to finish this story. It's good. It must be continued. Also, I want to see Kirito and Asuna get together.

Will it be continued?
I hope it will be continued.

Why did you abandon this story? I really liked it. I'm really disappointed that this story will remain unfinished.

Who got the rare drop in defeating the first main boss?

I dislike how you handled Diabel, turning him into an uncertain, hesitant, emotional wuss.

When are planning to update this story?

Moar Argo!

Interesting, so the pivotal moment that changed Kazuto in your fic was his involvement with Shino as a child, surprising way of handling his character change.

Awesome story, pity it seems to have been dropped, would like to see more.

Hrm, if Silica or Lisbeth got the last blow, what was the Last Hit Prize this time around? Kirito's Midnight Cloak was the symbol he used for the rest of the game as the Black Swordsmen, so did one of those two receive an equally noteworthy prize?

You do realise the term *Beater* wasn't actually introduced until after the Ilfang fight? *Beater* was a term invented and used to represent only one player, Kirito himself, the most skilled and advanced Beta Player who claimed to have advanced knowledge and tactics that far surpassed any of the original Beta Players, and was using it solely to his advantage. Beater was his title and his stigma in order to protect the other Beta Players by making a distinct difference between himself and the *innocent* Beta Players who he mocked as *pathetic wannabe's* compared to him.

This chapter was the best so far.
Can't find anything negative to say about this. This is really good.
now to sleeeeeeppppzzzzzzzzzzzz...

Up until this chapter I was truly enjoying this story. The divergence was based on a perfectly reasonable premise and it w as quite intriguing.

And then this chapter.

I don't mean any offense but this felt contrived as all get out. The ending was so obvious that if I were blind and throwing a ball with my foot and this chapter was a moving target, I'd hit ten times out of ten.

That's not to say it was a bad chapter. I loved the characterization of Hana and her friend and Shino's, the discovery of the legendary quest and her evolving mind-set.

Just hated the ending.

I will still be watching and I am hoping this story can redeem itself. I mean no offense, just my opinion.

Regards
SA

That ending, Kirito's worst and Argo's best, can't wait to read it lol