Reviews for The Prince of Swords
candel06 chapter 3 . 12/12/2023
Even though I'm reading this chapter for something like the 3rd of 4th time I always enjoy it. Because while canon Kirito is very much a loner, he DOES care tremendously for others. He just has absolutely NO clue on how to show it and over analyzes things and would rather be by himself than overthink all of his relationships ALL the time.
kunwarprajan chapter 2 . 12/8/2023
The amount of Sus dialogues in this story is simply outrageous I love it
lukejmontier1 chapter 1 . 9/14/2023
I swear to fucking god this better not be Kirito x his cousin.
Binge Reader chapter 10 . 8/4/2023
Pathetic
Ayaan Choudhary chapter 16 . 7/13/2023
Hey r u ever plan to continue this story
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 15 . 6/8/2023
How do you write this much and then abandon the story like a brain dead monkey retarded dumpster fire?
xCCookiesx chapter 16 . 6/1/2023
Been on a SAO kick lately and decided to look at the most reviewed fics, and i'm glad i checked this one out! At first I had low expectations bc of the first chap thinking this might only be a harem esque power fantasy fic (which isn't bad per se, but not what i was looking for (and this fic is kind of one, but def a well written and developed one)) but I was pleasantly surprised as time went on, loved the way you tackled the guild politics and the world and characters, you know when to be serious and when to crack jokes, and despite this Kirito being clearly op it's done in a way that i definitely enjoyed! Also loved the fight scenes, pretty cool!

When it comes to the romance I was a tad skeptical of the harem, if it's crack I just accept the shenanigans but if it's supposed to be a more serious take I expect it to be done well, and you got me into this whole harem/poly ship, i trust that you can make it work and won't feel forced. heck i'm truly rooting for them all to work out! (not a huge fan of kirito and his sis and/or silica, but each their own)

Overall this is one of the pretty good ones and I enjoyed every second, if I had to critique I'd say you tend to be repetitive over certain character descriptions, the amount of times you mention Kirito's effeminate looks or the 4/5 girls etc etc, like once in a while it's fine but you use that a lot, i think it would work much better if you used it more sparingly, all that aside you write good (picture Shang touching your shoulder in ur head author, it's me to you/your story) so thank you for sharing this one with us!
Not sure if you've abandoned this or not, just know that I'm glad to have read this and if this is all we get, it's still a good time, definitely one of the few I'll probably re read once in a while, again and again.
I wish you a good day/night/week/life! cya
Spellflame chapter 10 . 5/9/2023
They could have won
What else is there to say
enmmar chapter 3 . 4/29/2023
good chapter bro
Critic chapter 16 . 4/16/2023
I think kirito is being made fool and taken advantage of in name of being gentleman to those stupid girls. hopefully this stops as it is annoying me.
reptoholic chapter 9 . 2/19/2023
The girl he beat at the beginning of the story, his sisters kendo sempai?
reptoholic chapter 8 . 2/19/2023
poor girl, really hope they get a larger party!
reptoholic chapter 7 . 2/19/2023
RewLy hope their guild grows
reptoholic chapter 6 . 2/19/2023
Damnnnnnn
reptoholic chapter 5 . 2/18/2023
Keep it up
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