Reviews for The Prince of Swords
Adamant39 chapter 11 . 7/9
Love your fic so far, glad to see one focusing on relationships between characters without going full pornographic.

Btw, if u have time to spare (and i get it if u dont) could you check out my fic (Untold heroes) and give me feedback? It's my first story and i dunno what the top writers would think of it.
Still, as i said, don'tt feel pressured. But please? Have a smiley 4 ur time :-)
Twila Star chapter 10 . 7/8
Nice, nice, sad though, that they couldn't finish the boss fight! Such a waste, but honestly, if I put myself in their situation, I would retreat with the first wave, fearing my life, and not looking back, lol. -sighz- I'm going blind, but its for your story! KEEP WRITTING I love it! And don't say university kills creativity, I'm going this fall! D:
Hudsoda chapter 11 . 7/5
It seems that the author has disappeared completely without leaving any warning. Quite a shame though, this was one of my favorite stories of all time. Maybe one day I'll see it popping up at the top of the updated stories...
Twila Star chapter 8 . 7/3
The story is great as usual, it could have been the anime itself. Great job!
Twila Star chapter 7 . 7/1
Great chapter, sorry you feel you need an outline, I could never write a chapter with one! XD, I see this story isn't completed, please keep updating if it's not, I love the story and based on the amount of reviews (FOR JUST 11 CHAPTERS) I'm not the only one!
Twila Star chapter 6 . 7/1
This chapter was cute, as I imagined Kirito looked the way he did in Gun gale. The fluff with Kirito and Argo was especially enjoyable. Great chapter as always!
Twila Star chapter 5 . 6/30
Another good one! It doesn't matter that it was wordy! The good ones almost always are! And I was confused, wondering if the Royal Swords had other guild members besides the main five. I now see those twins in there, but with Argo being a recruiter, is there more? Loved the chapter, good work!
Twila Star chapter 4 . 6/28
Nice, I enjoyed the parts with kirito giving out the chocolates to the girls
abdul38rahman chapter 11 . 6/28
Awesome.. can't wait for more..
Twila Star chapter 3 . 6/27
Another great chapter, it always makes me happy to read this, especially with such a nice change such as Diabel stayed alive! so nice! I will definitly keep reading, and try to always leave a review (if there isn't any demanding, next-chapter-clicking cliff hangers) because i for one loves to see reviews pile up, even for stories already completed or done.
kilur77 chapter 11 . 6/27
Please make more. This story is wonderful...
Twila Star chapter 2 . 6/25
Nice, I'm still loving your chapters, but I have to ask (Though it'll probably be clarified in the next chapter) what did asuna mean when she said "please take responsibility"?
Slyr3x chapter 8 . 6/16
An item that can... Revive a player? Ho- Why wou- Dafu- What?

Iirc, as stated by the ever-glorious, condescending douche that is Akihiko Kayaba/Heathcliff, as soon as you 'die' in the game, the NerveGear emits a fatal localized EMP.

In other words, the glorified headgear practically fries the player's brain, essentially turning the recipient to a vegetable. Unless the in-game item(i.e. Necronomicon) can invoke some divine sorcery and/or black magic, the poor bastard is beyond saving at this point.

On another note... Great fic.
lifeswordpa chapter 2 . 6/12
really liked this chapter, great job!
lifeswordpa chapter 1 . 6/12
Very interesting!
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