|Reviews for The Saga of Cormag|
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Quite an interesting idea. The details provide a good level of verisimilitude. The writing is also pretty good, although there are a few typos.
My main problem with the story is that I don't find Cormag likeable. He's not only a soldier who follows horrible orders with little hesitation, but he actually volunteers to burn down a village. And it looks like he's only going to become worse! Although perhaps that's just my problem as I haven't played the Rise of Erebus mod and am not a fan of vampires in general.
I'd also have found it quite useful if it had been pointed out at the beginning that there is a glossary at the end.