|Reviews for Reverse Alternate|
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/8/2013
Haha... I really loved your viewpoint on Alastor and the glove ( which I hope is the serpent person but w/e) conversations
| lololooololoolol chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
i am a dwarf fucking a hole
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
| god of all chapter 4 . 1/18/2013
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon.
| hirai.wendy chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
please continue it, it's so awesome
like this yo wb
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
Yuji just slashed her and regretted it immediately? What a klutz, Shana has the right to force him to make up for it :D. Thought there are so many things she could command him. Like... CROSSDRESSING! Or he has to buy her a lot of stuff, or... he has to clean the whole house! Thought I like the crossdressing part the most.
If Fumina is part of Bal masque, shouldn't she notice that Yuji and Shana are Flame Haze? and also notice that their leader is the one contracted to Yuji and he agrees on Shana posing as his fiance... wow talk about... a mess. I am surprised Shana didn't demand for an explanation, why she has to pretend to be his fiance. XD
I can't wait for more. Keep up with the updating.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Wow that was an unexpected... announcement...
I mostly ignore word when it's checking the japanese words. I do notice that your grammar is much better than the last view chapters, oyu still need to improve, but it's better than nothing :D
| vBermudez chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
I keep on laughing when I read the 'introduction of Sakai Yuuji and Yukari' xD
Well, I suggest to enhance your grammar coz looks like I'm the only one ignores your gramma :D and people might not understand what you are trying to say.
Overall for this chapter, keep up the good work! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
So sweet of Yuji! and the title sounds pretty cool but i still read some grammar errors. I hope to read the next chapter soon.
| hirai.wendy chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
love it :)
i'm Shana fans too
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Finally another update :D and your welcome.
I really loved this chapter, you still need to improve your grammar, again I suggest using grammar check in word or doc manager. It took some time before I understood some sentence. Well I am surprised Shana didn't asked for a pay check, if Yuji threats her like a servant, then at least he should pay her. XD kidding.
You should try and find a beta readers, I am sure there are enough people who would want to beta read this. it's a good story and if you improve your grammar it'll be even better. :D
| vBermudez chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Great enhancement for this chapter. Well, I suggest you to fix your Chapter 1 too. :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
So a Mystes became a Flame Haze well anything is possible in fanfiction. and dont worry Ill tell dreamingflower-neesan that you updated when she gets back since she's been out all bay with our parents and coming up with things for her chapters. I wonder what's going to happen next and what's Yuji's title as Flame Haze? mostly their title is connected to their power. I wanna read it until the end.
(from: dreamingflower's imouto)
| vBermudez chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
You have a good start, but there are still errors:
1st - Capitalization
2nd - Grammar
I don't care about the Grammar, but I do in Capitalization. :)
Please fix it as possible as you can. Anyways, I'm interested in your story, keep up the good idea! :D
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
The story looks interesting, but you really need to work on your grammar and Shana is kinda OOC in here.
If her parent have disappeared then how can Yuji say that her parents agree for him to move in with her.
also when someone has amnesia, they're mostly empty and won't show any signs of emotions nor will they respond to anything, maybe the only response they will give is a small glance but that's everything. Remember how Hirai acted when she was a torch? Also empty and didn't respond much either.
The story is still fine and at least understandable, unlike some other fics were you're struggling to understand what's written. I suggest you get a beta reader for your chapters, so that they can look at the grammar.