|Reviews for The Sharpest Edge|
| random-k chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
| Rooivalk253 chapter 7 . 3/8/2013
OMG, this is soooo good! Please, please PLEASE update soon!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
If he continues to be ignored by the villagers, we will end up losing a valuable asset. Still, if that were ever to happen, I may find myself with a little free time. Perhaps I could show him a few basic skills." His eyebrows raised at his suggestion, and he smiled at Hitomi.
Isn't it suposed to be; Her eyebrows raised at his suggestion, and he smiled at Hitomi.
just i thought
I like the story :)
| agnar chapter 6 . 1/30/2013
I'll be honest, I skipped over the drawn out kiba-sasuke fight because I couldn't really bring myself to care about the details, only the result. I'd have been satisfied with 'after an impressive, drawn out fight, sasuke managed to narrowly defeat kiba' kind of thing.
Sorry, not to say anything bad about your fight descriptions, it's just that these fights don't *mean* anything, it's just a genin graduation exam. While I applaud the exams being tougher than canon, I still don't much care about the details of them.
| tennisdesi91 chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
Great start here! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
| Gewbur2010 chapter 7 . 12/16/2012
Story's goin' great so far! It's got just enough detail at the right pace to keep the interest flowing in a... well, interesting direction.
As far and the match goes... hard to say. One's got medical training so they know where to hit and the other's had access to fairly strong jutsu on a training trip.
Lookin' forward to the upcoming chapter!
| AJrax The Author chapter 7 . 12/4/2012
So. let me get this straight: Naruto is best buddies with Ino and has a strong connection with her parents, he is trained by Kakashi before he even gets his headband, he seems to be somewhat buddy-buddy with Sakura and the rest of Ino-Shika-Cho and even Sasuke a little more than actual canon AND he convinces Iruka and the other Leaf Higher-ups to make the graduation exam into a Chunin Exam type tournament...
I'm liking it. A nice AU. :) Can't wait for Naruto VS Ino next chapter.
| ClothesOptional chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I'm sorry, I couldn't force myself to read after the first couple of paragraphs. The whole villagers attacking Naruto opening is horrendously cliché and quite frankly, lazy as hell. It doesn't inspire confidence that the rest of the story will be any good because quite honestly most fics that use this 'opening' are terrible anyways.
| JelliedPanda chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
im glad we are giving you such praise; because you deserve it! you work hard and manage to bring up new daily chapters,packed with good description, lovely plots and fantastic fight scenes, not many people can write a good fight scene. normally the fight scene goes too fast and theres never enough description of whats going on where as you have described just enough to make me interested while youre getting on with it-pretty amazing, if you ask me! see you soon ;)
P.S i really dont know who to choose..ino ...naruto..ino.. . . !? INORUTO! XD yeah..tis hard to choose X_X
| foggraven chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
gah Cliffhanger! Now I'm really pumped for the next chapter
| ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36 chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
| skyfall007 chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
I like how you present Naruto and Ino in a different light... perhaps your perspective of them changes is a better choice of words.
| Sanguine Desires chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
| SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
This is the match i've been waiting for. It will be great. although sakura and hinata was a bit boring :/ pathetic fan-girl.
| serialkeller chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
Damn, cliffy .