Reviews for A Certain Unique Blonde
Guest chapter 8 . 7/8
well...i hope you get back with this fic...

hey...did you know that there's someone writing an hp and TMnI xover with 'almost' the same concept with this fic...
Guest chapter 8 . 6/9
Why are all the LV. 5s so OOC, but you definitely did Touma and Index's personalities perfectly.
Alex2909 chapter 8 . 5/14
like how naruko is portrayed in this story
Jose19 chapter 7 . 5/8
I want to see how this affect the relationships with Touma because Mikoto falls in love with Touma, and will this create problems with Naruko in the story later on.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 5/8
I find this chapter interesting because Touma as you know becomes the Main love interest for Mikoto and what will happen to Naruko by meeting Touma now, and remember Touma is not a weakling because he resembles the Naruto of the canon in guts and courage, and he never backs down from anybody.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 5/8
The Firebending style of fighting makes Naruko quite deadly in close combat but have you exploited her natural abilities as a Ninja because if she does come from that world she has advantages when it comes to close combat compared to others, and it is too bad that she doesn't have the power of chakra because she would be very overpowering in this story.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 3/5
not bad, we got a little insight into Naruko's mind... hmm, to be honest im kinda hoping Touma fades into the background only showing up occasionally like the 1st 5 chapters

looking for to more Naruko and the gang craziness...

hmm, hope you come back to this fic soon, it really is to good to just sit unfinished
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 3/5
pretty good, disappointed that it still went Canon and Naruko's presence changed nothing in the end... also, i am PISSED that Naruko kissed Touma, i seriously hope this is not a sign that those 2 will be the pairing... im still hoping for Naruko/Mikoto
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 3/5
haha, nice chapter... and wow, it seems Naruko has her own little version of a Susano AND she can use magic..

Naruko/Mikoto pairing or Naruko/Mikoto/Kuroko
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 3/5
very nice chapter... Index makes her appearance... Naruko shows a little of her more darker/soldier side...

pairing, i still stay true to my convictions and say Naruko/Mikoto with Kuroko added into it if ya feel like it but definitely Naruko/Mikoto (they are just damn cute together)

Touma can be paired with one of the many other girls who end up liking him
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 3/5
wow, 2nd degree burns in the shape as a hand print has to hurt... hmm, Code Breaker reference spotted as well

the Omake, hehe

pairing, well it can only be Naruko/Mikoto/Kuroko (the 3 of them have such a fun dynamic and they just fit together extremely well)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 3/5
hehe, another great chapter... hmm, you know between this and your "Whimsical Blondes" fic i have not come across a bad chapter...

anyways, im very much loving this fic (also your Whimsical Blondes fic as well, hope you continue it)

Mikoto and Naruko are so damn cute/adorable
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 3/5
lol, another great chapter... hmm, seriously hoping Naruko only see's Touma as a friend/brother, i will be seriously disappointed if she crushes on him (Naruko/Mikoto FTW)

the little Omake was amusing also, i wonder what Mikoto would do if/when Naruko tells her who ask'd her
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 3/4
this was pretty damn good...

really hoping that if there is a pairing it wont be Touma, i mean he ain't to bad but Naruko/Mikoto is soooo much better
Derox-1223 chapter 1 . 2/8
Coincidentally the fire bending was what came to mind during the fight scene. I guess that means you did a good job of describing it.
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