|Reviews for Saint Just's Return|
| Phoenixflames12 chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
I love this! Your characterisations of all of them are just phenomenal- I could go on for pages and pages about how much I love the almost maternal relationship you've created between Patria and Enjolras and St Just.. The confrontations between him and the leader in red really shouldn't make me laugh but they do because he's so wonderfully fiery and so similar to Enjolras in temperament that I'm surprised they don't just consume each other- beautifully written Mon Ami! I also adore the way you write the Combeferre/Courfeyrac tension; much as I love them being a happy friendship trio- it's always refreshing to see someone take a different slant on their relationship- well done! x
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
I am intrigued!
I like the choice of Courfeyrac as Enjolras' confidante; his relation with Saint-Just is so different from Enjolras and Saint-Just, and I can't wait to see more interaction between the two. I have one question though: overall what is Enjolras' opinion on Saint-Just? In the Brick, it seemed like he idolised him and now he thinks he was a tyrant. Perhaps something happened in the other room that change his mind?
(Saint-Just didn't execute thirty thousand people. I had to add that in somewhere.)
| Cosette Fauchelevent chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
yay! You've finally updated! XD I was waiting for ages. Patria too? Poor old Enjy's probably having a field day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Well, I could spend a while nit-picking at the slight - I wouldn't call them historical inacuracies, per say, just what I believe is more correct.
I've heard Saint-Just being refered to as Louis before, but mostly he was called by his second name, Antoine.
Also, M. Enjolras (if M stands for monsieur) should be replaced with citoyen. It was the Revolution, after all.
And I can't seem to figure out who this Vanessa is, but if she's an OC, that's cool.
Please don't take this as bad critisism; I'm actually quite intrigued in this story. And was that implyed Robespierre / Saint-Just? I approve!
Good job, I hope to read more soon!
| Cosette Fauchelevent chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Ooh! This sounds interesting! Please continue soon!