Can Pain even beat Naruto? I mean Naruto is a lot stronger than he was in canon during the Pain arc. Not to mention he has all of his friends who are also stronger than their canon versions.

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my issue here is that Kabuto is NO match for Jiraiya in sage mode (and is at best mid diff for Jiraiya out of Sage Mode), even Jugo shouldn't have been able to match either Four tails Naruto or Jiraiya, as such Kabuto getting the scroll feels forced meaning whatever happens with it will also feel forced.

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sir if I Robert Krause having seeing 4 things you over look is the vaillge will not let Naruto get to the next rack up or his mom and dad money and home too , thinks to Kakashi who had not love or like to help out the boy , 2 is sarkra is a fan gril who need a seeing things for Naruto will move for her but she needs to seeing things too , as for his home the red light it is for the most loses and not seeing mebers of the vaillge .

when in the whirlpool Naruto had get a old boat home he be working on when sill took out the ship hits out and saving the men who get took form lovers and homes too ,when be on the open sea doing it form his ship the fox king of sea ,who is to took out ships and ship out too ,when be on the sea he and the ship had took some of 400.00,to 600.000 ships out took the food money and cap. own things too and when he took out the most head men and woman out Billy ford and his tame out and the woman too ,when it the shop Naruto money be so big and he get home he be working on his new home now , with art of men and woman he took out it his cub office and when on the top floor is some hot woman form the stars like a blue grils with big size bodds out and in gold armore and boots too , when in time the others seeing it now think his nuts and when not thinking why others thinks is why Naruto is good it ,

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Boring in my opinion.. sorry...

when in the whirlpool Naruto had get a old boat home he be working on when sill took out the ship hits out and saving the men who get took form lovers and homes too ,when be on the open sea doing it form his ship the fox king of sea ,who is to took out ships and ship out too ,when be on the sea he and the ship had took some of 400.00,to 600.000 ships out took the food money and cap. own things too and when he took out the most head men and woman out Billy ford and his tame out and the woman too ,when it the shop Naruto money be so big and he get home he be working on his new home now , with art of men and woman he took out it his cub office and when on the top floor is some hot woman form the stars like a blue grils with big size bodds out and in gold armore and boots too , when in time the others seeing it now think his nuts and when not thinking why others thinks is why Naruto is good it ,

Continuity error the third world ninja war is the war the fourth hokage is acclaimed to help turn the tide not the second that’s jiraiya and tsunades era

A genjutsu clan should really welcome someone with a lots of s genjutsu

No drunken fist from the narcotics?

Sasuke should sell his Tora summoning services

Now this chapter has been bugging me a lot. Naruto, despite being a MASTER of Frog Kumite (which btw is still an excellent taijutsu style even without using Sage Mode) as well as rapidly gaining ground on, if not nearly matching, Jiraiya in taijutsu, is still being totally dominated by Hinata there. That doesn't make any sense at all, period. Not saying her taijutsu is too good, just that Naruto's taijutsu was obviously and deliberately gimped here (he never lacked in taijutsu at all in canon). What makes it worse is that he trained in kenjutsu for a fraction of the time spent training his taijutsu, and yet he still massively outclasses Hinata in close combat there. What you should have done there (to balance things out) is at least make him competent enough to be able to fight Hinata defensively and hold his ground there, and overpower her to a respectable degree with his sword. Also, Naruto and Sasuke should be A, not A. If Hinata and Sakura are A-, Lee should be A-. Personally, all 3 should be no higher than B if anything, albeit being close to A-.

That aside, the story is a massive improvement from the early chapters.