Reviews for The Evening Dust
CindyWindy chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I love well written AU vamp stories, so this one is perfect for me! I especially liked Edward stopping his own moving car, and Bella calling him a dumbass. Thanks for sharing your writing!
cecilia4059 chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
It's fate. But I couldn't help but wonder what the outcome would be if Alice didn't interfere. I'm happy that this Edward didn't let the chance of love slip through his fingers like what happened in NM. Love it. Thanks.
greeneyes84 chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
Just found this today and I absolutely loved it. I would love to see this continued. I've read a few of your fics now and I gotta say, u rock!
Kageyjay chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
No matter how it happened, when it happened, and in which order it happened, they were meant to find each other, and meant to be together, weren't they?
Unfortunately there are a lot of typos, but your story was good enough to keep me reading anyway. And as I read on...I really liked it!
I do like that you wrote this from Edward's POV. I think it's very much what his thoughts would be.
aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Wow! I love this story. How they meet, how she got to Forks, and the kiss! I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
So sweet - I really enjoyed this, thank you.
TessLouise chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Really like this!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
It was beautiful!
Raum chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
Deliciously sweet story! Thanks for writing!

- Raum from Italy
Raum chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful story!
Raum chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Nice and intriguing!
TessLouise chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Awesome! Great premise.
Camilla10 chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
I loved this to bits. It is something to reread when one needs to be cheered up.
I have only a quetion: What about Alice? Why did she leave her quest? that part leaves a non finished feeling.
Camilla10 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I found this story recced on ADF and it i L.
(But why would a vampire buy a cherry beverage? that had me puzzled)
Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
This chapter gave me those wonderful butterflies that I got when I read Twilight. Not many writers can do that, bring that feeling back. Thank you so much! I really loved this- don't be a stranger when it comes to writing and posting :-D
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