Reviews for The Evening Dust
Kageyjay chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
No matter how it happened, when it happened, and in which order it happened, they were meant to find each other, and meant to be together, weren't they?
Unfortunately there are a lot of typos, but your story was good enough to keep me reading anyway. And as I read on...I really liked it!
I do like that you wrote this from Edward's POV. I think it's very much what his thoughts would be.
aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Wow! I love this story. How they meet, how she got to Forks, and the kiss! I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
So sweet - I really enjoyed this, thank you.
TessLouise chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Really like this!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
It was beautiful!
Raum chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
Deliciously sweet story! Thanks for writing!

- Raum from Italy
Raum chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful story!
Raum chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Nice and intriguing!
TessLouise chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Awesome! Great premise.
Camilla10 chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
I loved this to bits. It is something to reread when one needs to be cheered up.
I have only a quetion: What about Alice? Why did she leave her quest? that part leaves a non finished feeling.
Camilla10 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I found this story recced on ADF and it i L.
(But why would a vampire buy a cherry beverage? that had me puzzled)
Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
This chapter gave me those wonderful butterflies that I got when I read Twilight. Not many writers can do that, bring that feeling back. Thank you so much! I really loved this- don't be a stranger when it comes to writing and posting :-D
Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Oh my gosh! I am seriously swooning here! You've given Edward such a rich, flesh-out voice! He is 100% teenage boy and 100% hundred year old vampire. This is seriously fantastic :-D
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Oooh, I like this. I love fics where Vampward and Bella meet under non-canon circumstances. This cracked me up:
"Get out of town!" Bella exclaimed...
"I already did," I replied.
moosals chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
This was such a beautifully imagined story and a plausible alternative to the original. Thank you so much...I wil put a smile in the other two chapters just because :)
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