|Reviews for The Evening Dust|
| Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Oh my gosh! I am seriously swooning here! You've given Edward such a rich, flesh-out voice! He is 100% teenage boy and 100% hundred year old vampire. This is seriously fantastic :-D
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Oooh, I like this. I love fics where Vampward and Bella meet under non-canon circumstances. This cracked me up:
"Get out of town!" Bella exclaimed...
"I already did," I replied.
| moosals chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
This was such a beautifully imagined story and a plausible alternative to the original. Thank you so much...I wil put a smile in the other two chapters just because :)
| moosals chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Thank you :)
| moosals chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
| roon0 chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
This was lovely and I enjoyed it hugely.
| Annie chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
you are such a lovely writer. i really enjoyed this. thank you so much! it was so sweet.
| Hushi Taloa chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
This story was AMAZINGLY sweet and romantic. I loved it, and just wished it were longer. Did Alice see Edward meeting Bella? Is that why she had her sudden change of heart? Will there be resolution with the nomads? It feels like... there's more story in you waiting to be told. Or probably that's just wishful thinking.
Anyway, thank you so, so much for writing.
| naruto and twilight fan33 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Great! I really like this less infuriatung Bella and Edward...heehee!
| se7en29 chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Love it! Can't wait for the next update!
| Missy B chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Loving your story. Feel like I'm there. :)
| DutchGirl01 chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Really enjoyed this chapter, can’t wait for more.
| favludo chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
How wonderful to be able to read something new from you! And something so beautiful too. Thank you for taking the time to write and post this lovely story :)
| Scorpio11 chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
Very interesting twist on the original. Thanks.