|Reviews for The Evening Dust|
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
I was surprised Bella knew and that she packed a bag and ran back to him. Good!
I like it a whole bunch! Can't wait for the rest.
| lindyrb chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Wow! Great new story! Yep, I'm betting Alice's sudden willingness to go home was directly tied to getting Edward to turn his car around.
Can't WAIT to read more!
| Scorpio11 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Interesting twist on canon. I like the similarities they've found in their lives already.
| Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Thanks for sharing!
| averysubtlegift chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
AWWWWW! Ruby, I am so in love with this already. It really makes me long for the days when fic was just simple to enjoy and a good story was always waiting to take you somewhere wonderful. In all honesty it has been quite a while since I've read any fic - but this was well worth coming back for. I always love your version of Edward - even though each is different they are all so swoon worthy, and I can't help but adore them. The details you include always draw me in - the drink, the stain on her shirt, the ever present dust of the desert... and the way you allow us to feel so connected to your characters so quickly. I thank you so much for finishing this - it means so much to me that you have. I'll be anxiously awaiting the rest.
| K chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
That's it...way to leave a person hanging! You write really well. Can't wait to read more.