Reviews for Temporary Partnership
Inner Self chapter 3 . 3/20
You know how to make a story flow. You know how to control the dialogue. It's just... the story has immature characters, and I cannot stand it. I know some elements would be enjoyable, roughly half, if I continue, or perhaps its just half the initial premises that I do not enjoy. Anyway, before I continue my search for the perfect fanfic for moi, I shall tell you my opinion:
1. I wish the potion Hermione was making was MORE believable. Hermione doesn't have to search for her parents right away. She just wants to begin her search A.S.A.P. How can someone so wreckless be Head Girl? Wolfsbane would be more believable b/c the chance is much greater that Slughorn would allow her to brew felix felicis OR even wolfsbane, but no one (I assume) wants more people than necessary to know that they are a werewolf. I guess I was dead set on the werewolf thing. That was the only reason I could think of for hermione to be dead set on turning her social life upside down.
2. Just put Ginny under a vow of silence. I mean, come on, Harry and Ron aren't even around to blab that the relationship is a sham.
If you retweak the story, please let me know. ;P No hard feelings?
Inner Self chapter 2 . 3/20
I wish there was a way to bet money through the internet. I bet that Hermione is a werewolf.
katkeller1221 chapter 8 . 3/19
Wait what? That's it? Come on now...
riskeybusiness chapter 8 . 3/12
This is the first draco/hermione fanfic I have read and I have to say I sceptical at first but by gosh you have converted me. That was a cute, well-written story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. So thank you!
Shlayne chapter 8 . 3/10
Loved it!
Kim chapter 8 . 2/26
Such a cute story! Great job :)
Guest chapter 8 . 1/5
Hello! Just read your fic for the last couple of days. Okay... I teared up a bit at the end. Everything especially the last couple of chapters were beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Cannot believe how could you have come up with this. Thank you for an amusing fic! Your best one if you would ask me. LOVE IT TO DEATH AND WELL DONE :) - .com
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
To cute, story was very different then I thought it would be it was really good and kept me wanting to read more and more.
littlemisselvee chapter 8 . 10/30/2013
Well done for keeping everyone in character! :)
Baitdcat chapter 8 . 10/24/2013
You kept me reading till the last page. A thoroughly enjoyable story, well done!
MissEmilieBeth chapter 8 . 10/21/2013
I loved this story so much - I just want to read more and more XD xxx
Rebekah Hermione Chase chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
i loooooved this story! its so cute and perfect! its so hard to find one where it follows their feelings from the very hateful beginning to the very cute end! i just loved your story! it was AWESOME!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
I don't really give reviews but this piece captured my heart and inspired me to. Thank you and wonderful work. This chapter was a bit hurried in some places but the ending with backpacking in Australia... I love it!
guestttt chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
You asked if people liked it when you published this chapter. Just as a bit of thought for you; there may be a number of readers, exactly like myself, that don't usually read WIP's. I've been disappointed time and time again by authors that start strong and then fall off the face of the planet and leave stories at the most crucial point and never finish. So, that being said, I don't review until they're completed. And that means that you'll be getting at least one more review from me for this story. Hope that might make you feel a bit better next time your response is not quite what you'd hoped. There will probably be more reviewers coming once the story is finished. :-)
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