Since I read this story before and apparently, I also reviewed the last chapter. I’m reviewing this one instead my reaction once again to the last chapter, or rather the entire story. Loved Love Love this story!

Disturbed is a very good word for Bree. I have to admit though, I feel really bad for her. Even though she did what she did. She really only wants someone to love her. I’m glad it was more about Bree and her jealousy of Bella than Edward though. She wants everything that Bella has.

I figured it was Bree, but I wasn’t absolutely sure why. I think she may have some sort of dysfunction like being bi-polar or multiple personalities, or something along those lines. Either way she’s definitely seriously unstable.

Well I think we now know what Bree’s plans were. She had the opportunity at the office to have access to Bella’s stuff and files. I’m accusing her.

Like I said before, I don’t think James has a motive. I think he definitely has a creepy way to show he’s concerned, but I think that’s really all it is. We need to remember that he is socially awkward and seems to not know what is appropriate. He may have been thinking about it or talking to Victoria about it and come up with the worries that he expressed to Bella. I think he’s sincere though.

I’ll be honest, James may be socially inept, but he’s really in love with Victoria, or so it seems. I see no reason to think it’s him. Plus he’s not really around the studio that much. I still think Bree has some kind of hang up. Angela seems extremely unlikely also. There doesn’t seem to be anyone else who would be a culprit.

I think that the corrupted files and the camera battery dead and misplacement of the back-ups are definitely a red flag. I think it is definitely someone n her office. I DO think it’s Bree, but I still don’t have a clue why. Maybe Bree has had a thing for Edward and is upset that Bella has him.

Not really sure who would do that or why. I don’t think it’s James- It seems he is happy with Victoria.

I haven’t had a feeling it might’ve been Bre who might cause some trouble just by her demeanor.

Alice and Jasper’s meet-cute was exactly that - a very cute meeting and beginning. I hope whomever is “not happy” about her happiness and success is not too mean or dangerous.

Sweet story. Smitten is a good description of Edward. Thanks for writing

Bella acted like a jerk. She could’ve explained wanting to spend time alone a little nicer. He was way too quick to apologize to her. She should have apologized to him.

Cute story. I like that their actual relationship had no drama. It’s refreshing.

Loved reading this outtake!

Great ending! Stroke of genius to have the story end in Esme’s POV!