Reviews for crazier
Steve the Icecube chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Even if you have help, I recommend getting a beta, as the grammar is rather sloppy. 'Hollyleaf of Project Aero'
MilleniumRide1 chapter 10 . 10/10/2012
:O UPDATE!
MilleniumRide1 chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
omg omg omg omg nudges baby has my name!i love ur storu. please update!
Me: *wakes up* What the? Why am i tied to a chair? Where am i...
Fang: *chuckles* whats wrong Mill? huh?
Me: DONT. CAL. ME. THAT.
Fang: awwww whats wrong...does Mill not like that nickname?
Me: . . .
Fang: haha whos the coward now? *turns around*
Me: *uses power to turn shapeshift into max(sounds like her too)* Fang. let me go!
Fang yea right i know its you Millenium...
Me: No Fang. Im Max! i never told you but, i got a new power and i can shapeshift and make things manifest out of thin air. When we were at the school i got it and i created another cage with a girl named Millenium in there, and the whitecoats that took her for experimentation were all fake, nonexistense!
Fang: So you disquised yourself as Millenium? Does tht Millenium isnt real then?
Me: Yes and Yes...
Fang: oh *cuts rope*
Me: Go into my room. *Runs to the bathroom and closes and locks the door. Shapeshifts back into my normal self* i can not believe he fell for that!
TO BE CONTINUED ONCE AGAIN- UPDATE
MilleniumRide1 chapter 8 . 10/3/2012
OMG I LOVE UR STORY!PLEASE UPDATE!
Me:ok...fang hasnt killed me yet...right now im hiding in one of the cuberts. *hears footsteps* o.o O.O *cubert door slowlt creaks open, i turn invisable*
Gazzy: Hey Millie.
Me:how can u see me? shhhh...fangs trying to kill me.
Gazzy:Fang left to search for you in the forest...and i could here you breathing.
Me:*crawls out of cubert looks around* phew.
Gazzy: *drops small obbjet and leaves*
Me: huh? *picks up object ad drops it while trying to run out the door onlyy
to find the door locked object starts to spray wierd gas* O.O FU-*passes out*
TO B CONTINUED... :P
Pitch-Slap chapter 8 . 10/3/2012
Great! More!
MilleniumRide1 chapter 7 . 10/1/2012
OMG. that...i was not expecting. LOVE the story. UPDATE PLEASE
MilleniumRide1 chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
AWWWWWW WHY DID U STOP THERE! *cies* TOTAL SUSPENSE...i want to know what happens next and what angel was talking aout...i thought max was having twins? PLEASE UPDATE...or...or ill tell angel to control your mind to write the chapter. YEA. ill do that...thats a good plan! I forgot to mention im living with the flock its awsome.
Me:FANG GET IN HERE. TELL THE AUTHOR HI.
Fang: . . .
Me: Do IT!
Fang: . . .
Me: I WILL DYE YOUR HAIR PINK FANG NICKOLAS RIDE!
Fang: . . .
Me: Whats wrong tooth, Fnickles, Fangy, Fangypoo! you being a wimp.
Fang: . . .
Me: haha fangs being a wimp oh my gosh this is hilar-
Fang:* Throws chair at Millenium*
Me: *Screams* MAAAXXXXXXX FANGS TRYING TO KILL ME AND HE BROKE MY COMPUTER! *Knife flies through the air* UUUHHHHHHH. *i turn invisable and run through the wall*
Fang: GET. BACK. HERE.
Me: * eyes go wide with fright, whispers* Please update...before Fang kill me...
MilleniumRide1 chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!:"P i am crying tears of joy cuz its soo good! oh annd i was previously known as Millenium Ride but i forgot my email...and password so i created a new account. UPDATE!*does bambi eyes*
Millenium Ride chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
im creating a new account. my name is gonna be MilleniumRide1. Please upda. i love ur story soooo much.
Millenium Ride chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
...i cant believe im the onlyy one thats reviewed so far...ppl r jerks if they havnt read ur story. ITS SUPER GOOD..no scratch good...ITS FANTABULOUS! Please update. :P
Millenium Ride chapter 2 . 9/27/2012
OMG UPDATE PLEASSEEEE. *does bambi eyes* please. i love ur story
Pitch-Slap chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
Try writing in paragraphs. Use spell check often. Don't use words like yall. Try to capitalize names.
The story plot itself is great though!