Reviews for Family, Malady, and the Aftermath
Charles Winkles III chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
Cool story brah
-C.W.3
Charles Winkles III chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
In 5th paragraph, you have some errors. You call the mom a he and you call Mako a she, fix it and this will be awesome.
Other than that, again with the t.v. In my head.
Good jawb
-C.W.3
Charles Winkles III chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
That was good I would have never guessed you dislike Mako.
It was like t.v. In my head.
It was so good it's orgasmic.
-C.W.3