Reviews for I Won't Say It
Non Malum chapter 49 . 9/16/2011
Great story! I hope you continue this soon 'cause I LUV it!

I started reading it last night, and couldn't stop!
Lullabyes chapter 18 . 7/19/2011
Love this. Amazing humor, quippy dialogue and great OCs. It brings back fond memories of the original disney franchise. Excellent job!
Shahrezad1 chapter 49 . 7/19/2011
Wow. I am seriously impressed. As in, "ah, crap, I just stayed up reading till 3 am and now I have to get up at 6,"-impressed. XD

Well, I did pause after chapter 45 to get some sleep. But all in all, this story just kept me completely hooked. :) Especially in regards to things like the little details you pull together; Echidna, for one. And the brotherly/sisterly relationship of Anubis and Bast for another. (By the way, now I really want to draw the two of them based on your interpretation. -laughs-)

Also, I adore Persephone's personality, not to mention Bremos and Nike, especially. The twins are adorable, I like the twist on Cronus being high, ironically. -laughs- Because, well, how else are you to tame an untameable god?

All in all, great work. I feel like I'm returning to my best years of school when I read this, with a bit of a fun, modern twist. And truly, Hades is at his best.

Cheers. _
naioka1992 chapter 49 . 6/12/2011
This is brilliant - I love the humour and the way you managed to turn Hades into a 'family man' without making him out of character. (Kudos for that. I'd have one hell of a time trying to do it half as well as you have.)

The plot's interesting as well. Some fanfics just focus on one thing, but this fic's developed lots of levels, like Bremos's ongoing issues with Nike, while everybody else runs around panicking about Cronus (who, by the way, cracked me up. Best solution EVER to a cannibalistic God). Rhea is great as well, and Demeter makes me sympathise with Seph and Hades, since she gets on my nerves (in a good way, though).

Apart from telling you I love this, and that I appreciate the mythology lessons in between, I'd also like to ask if you'd noticed that Persephone did actually have a daughter, called Melinoe. She was the goddess of offerings to the dead, and wandered around at night followed by a train of ghosts, supposedly why dogs will bark at absolutely nothing sometimes. The thing is, though, her father isn't Hades - it's Zeus, who disguised himself as Hades to get with Persephone.

Basically, the reason why I'm bringing your attention to this is that I love idiot-Zeus, and I'd love to see you take a crack at this one, particularly since it is "cannon" (for lack of a better word).

But, I digress. Basically, this fanfiction is fantastic, and I want to see everyone's heads get messed with a little more. Plus, if it gets Rhea to lecture the heck out of Zeus again I'd actually cry laughing.

Soooooo, thanks a whole tonne for writing this fic. Feel free to ignore my suggestion, I just wanted you to be aware of it (apologies if you already were).

Keep writing! (Please!)

naioka1992

xx
Princess Aaliyah chapter 49 . 6/6/2011
Nice chapter. Happy that you updated recently after a couple of years. Please continue on with it. This has got to be one of the funniest and interesting Hercules stories I had ever read. Please update very soon. :)
Princess Aaliyah chapter 48 . 6/6/2011
LOL. Funny a hippy like stoned Cronus.
Princess Aaliyah chapter 47 . 6/6/2011
LOL Cronus comes out of his internal imprisonment stoned. ROFL
Princess Aaliyah chapter 46 . 6/6/2011
To say Rhea is pissed is a definite understatement.
Princess Aaliyah chapter 45 . 6/6/2011
Cronus is getting released. Zeus is totally stupid.
Princess Aaliyah chapter 44 . 6/6/2011
LOL Love the internal monologues with all of the characters, especially Cerberus. Its funny how all the guys are mortified and freaking out over Despair :)
Princess Aaliyah chapter 43 . 6/6/2011
Awww Hades is totally besotted with Chaos. I bet when she gets older she will make Hades do what she wants. I wonder what Lackhos and Chaos positions are? And a FEMALE Imp. Ohh Boy XD
Princess Aaliyah chapter 42 . 6/6/2011
Awwww. Twins. And one of them is a girl :). Can't wait to see how Hades will deal with fathering a daughter.
Princess Aaliyah chapter 41 . 6/6/2011
The baby is coming :). Seph being hormonal is funny especially the way Bremos is handling it. :)
Princess Aaliyah chapter 40 . 6/6/2011
Funny Chapter.
Princess Aaliyah chapter 39 . 6/6/2011
Great chapter.
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