Whoa...the idea of an R-rated Disney fanfic...disturbing... *shudders* Anyway, get used to all the reviews Melora, this is one bloody good fanfic you have! And about the tradational thing I just think that even though traditional is good, I like to be surprised. So keep on writing, I'm looking forward to see where exactly you're gonna go with this. Nice chapter (oooh, the plot thickens...) and again, I can't get enough of your brilliant characterization job with Hades and Pain & Panic - you really nailed them (despite being 'nailed' not sounding very good for a certain two imps...). And I'm loving your job with Persephone more and more. Now for a pointless question - if Disney went up to your door and said they wanted to make this a movie, who would you like best to do the voice-over for Persephone? Just some random curious craziness from a reviewer high on hot chocolate right now...

Hey, I love this! Great characterizations, you did a brilliant job with Hades and Hermes (and Zeus' sense of humour...or lack therof...) and I love how you've portrayed Persephone. Looking forward to how you're going to retell the rest of the myth. Please continue!

Lokai? Is that like the Norse god of mischief? Cause if it is, it's spelt Loki. Anyway - very good chapter, and I love the insults to Zeus' sense of humour. Pain as Cerberus' chew-toy was funny, too. I like Persephone - she's like the modern image of a rebellious teenager ... and the 'that sounds familiar' line was funny (if it meant what I think it meant). The quote from the movie has to be one of my favourites, too.

And Hades: lighten up, this is a great fic, and there's nothing wrong with romance (although I don't see the soppiness here).

I so can't wait to read next chapter.

VMorticia; aka, She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named

I love this story! You have to continue! You're very good and I love Hades.

Hey - this is great. I like the way you did about Hades ordering Pain and Panic to walk Cerberus ... very funny. I think you should call Cerberus 'Fluffy' but that's just my Harry Potter obcession. And the way you mentioned in passing, the plague causing Charon to work overtime - you can really make this believeable. It's a good start - tell me when the next chapter is up, so I can read more.

Brilliant.

VMorticia; aka, She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named

yay! this is so cool. I love this. Not only did you include two of my favorite characters, Hermes and Hades but the whole idea with Persephone being rebellious is intriguing. Well done, please keep going!

Hey, this is pretty good! You seem to have a nice handle on Hades'... shall we say, unique personality?

And I like the branching out into other mythological stories. Hope to see more soon!