Reviews for Pieces of Eight
Everlasting123 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
this was sooo accurate and good.i loved it.
Gabs chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I love the detail of Ziva being upset over the vending machines, of all things. It's just so thoughtful, the way someone can take a minor thing and connect it to the bigger picture and I like that you included that here.
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Good story.
Interesting to see things from each team members' POV.
ncis-1001 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
i like the opening, very in character. please update soon x
sopmire chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Really well done! Wish these interludes could have been included in the episode! The one about Tony not wanting to be alone, oof. And that's pretty much what Gibbs told him, 'don't be like me'. Thanks for writing and sharing
Craftygirl11 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
This gave me goosebumps. You captured the emotions of everyone and I applaud you for it. Great job. Now all we have to do is wait for next week for the new episode. Awesome story.
rockyshadow chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I really like how you've written everybody's points of view about what's happened to them. Despite the fact that so many members of the team have issues with their families I'm glad they have each other to lean on while trying to deal with the bombing aftermath.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Thank you for acknowledging that last scene. This was beautifully written, touching all the hinted at but not shown thoughts of the characters.
hopeisabluebird chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Damn, they all have such extreme daddy issues (on a side note... I was a little miffed when they wrote daddy issues in for McGee. If felt a little too pat after detailing the extreme angst of Ziva and Tony's relationships with their fathers - and Gibbs' mild awkwardness with his. It almost felt like the writers thought, "Oh no! McGee has no family drama! Let's make one! What can we do?... Ah! Daddy issues! Because we've written that before!" Sigh).

Anyway, lovely, lovely story. I loved Tony and Abby's sections the best. I thought this was a nice cap to the premiere (which, as you said, was good but not *that* good. Then again, I would be happy if this season was even a tenth better than last season). I thought you did really well writing each character's inner voices (which is *tough*). Keep writing!
EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I really enjoyed this, especially the Tim part. There was not enough of him in the episode.