|Reviews for Darkness|
| Fenra77 chapter 12 . 1/24
If i would not have known your crave for happy endings, I would have stopped reading at chapter 4. Im happy I didnt.
| fireblaze 7 chapter 12 . 1/20
i loved it, couldn't put it down for a second
| bchiles21 chapter 12 . 1/5
OMG! Loved it! Have you considered doing a kind of off set bit with Shuuhei getting what's coming to him in prison?
| clarit chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
awww It's been great. the fluff was necessary after so much ugly sobbing and trauma XD
you did good! :D
| clarit chapter 10 . 11/15/2013
It's like you read my mind!
I was like "talking is good, boys, talk".
and then came the lemon and I felt wary and couldn't feel completely at ease because I kept thinking about Inoue (poor orihime, you made her suffer from this in 'roommate' too XD and she was so adorable in this).
and then ichigo said he'd fix it and i was like "ichigo, please lock renji inside your car if that's even remotely possible in your car, cause I know it isn't possible in any car i've ever been in but you're in a fanfic so maybe you can make it work, cause that boy is running".
and I was right!
and I know i'm ranting but it's 6 am and I should be sleeping but I've started reading this and I'm exhausted but too hooked up! _ I think i'm stopping now.
I think i'll dream about ichigo catching up to renji, for this very few hours of sleep i'll be able to get -_- *sigh* it was worth it though. I'll die, I mean sleep with no regrets.
| clarit chapter 9 . 11/15/2013
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!
just that xD
| clarit chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
NO you CAN'T afford yourself one last week, Renji!
RUN, RENJI, RUN!
karakura is a death trap, an ichigo trap, you won't be able to escape it!
lol, I didn't expect Isshin to be there, my jaw actually dropped.
I'm really loving this Renji.
I wasn't able to for the first chapters but now I'm proud of him.
I can't wait for ichi's point of view though, I bet not everything is fine in our beautiful berry's head.
I bet he still thinks about renji and misses him and being with inoue is just not the same.
not everything is as nice and neat and perfect as it seems from the outside. right?
I'm sincerely rooting for renji now! be happy ren ren.
| clarit chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
WHAT?! DEAD!? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?!
no he's not, sorry for yelling XD
thank god for starrk's brain, and good looks.
I'm writing this as I'm reading, that's why it's a little weird.
I always feel shy about reviewing fics that were completed a while back, I feel outdated and uncool (?) so I wouldn't have started this if you hadn't fake-killed renji :) but my reaction was so violently shocked that I felt the need to share XD
your fics are great, btw.
I loved the 'roommate', love 'lights, camera, action', felt a little confused about 'shower' (omg i couldn't believe szayel! he's so horrible!) and this is a little confusing too (you gave me shuuhei trauma) but still really good, so far.
I think I personally prefer the lighter ones, though :) cause they are deep enough to feel meaningful, even in the absence of twisted wickidness XD.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/19/2013
Wow...this turned from a one night stand to rape then to action then to fluffy romance and tragity along wit some smut! Like I said u r the best writer I have ever read from! I'm gonna give u a request or two if ya don't mind...
THIS IS FROM KIRASRIVAL
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/19/2013
HOLLY SHIT U MADE ME CRY IN THE LAST CHAPTER! GOOD JOB MY FRIEN TRUE WRITER! My mind got raped and then I cried then went through the five stages of grief
1st dinial: no...no he...he wouldn't he's still alive...y-yea...
2 anger: WHY! WHY DID HE DO THAT!FUCKIN SHUUHEI! THEY WHERE SO CLOSE!
3bargaining : if only he'd tapped the bug sooner or...was saved sooner...!
4 depression: *cries* they won't be together...it's just to saaaaaad...!
5 acceptance : he was a good man. Their love will live on in the afterlife..
| My0wnlittleworld247 chapter 12 . 5/3/2013
Hanatarou and Orihime :D Cute much?
Oh, and I especially love Orihime's part in the chapter before, how she was all worried about Ichigo's relationship, even though she loved him.
| My0wnlittleworld247 chapter 11 . 5/3/2013
Thank God! I was terribly worried that Ichigo wasn't going to punch him :) I've really enjoyed this so far, the fluff wasn't over done at all, and I'm glad it didn't work out perfectly to begin with. Ichigo's running in the train station was so dramatically sad, I loved every bit of it, and I cracked up when Renji didn't have the money for a ticket.
Great story! :D Shuuhei is totes evil on the inside.
| yaoisthegame chapter 12 . 3/6/2013
Furious. When renji and shuuhei rape the poor ichigo...
Sad. At renji 'death'... I symphatize ichi's part...
Happy. When they met again.
Hate renji. When he acted too immature.
Amaze, and i almost cried, at ichigo's emotional outburst in the train station...
Content, of how it end...hehe...
Yeah, all in all, reading this put me in a roller coaster ride... I have fun reading it...
| TokenAsian chapter 12 . 1/16/2013
| Kai-Chan0876 chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
That's was extremely good! Your talent is amazing. I had to stop reading for a second when it said that Renji had died... and I might've cried :) Also, the ending was really good and I'm happy to see that they all had a wonderful ending