|Reviews for Black Moon Hunters|
| Corala chapter 14 . 7/16
So will they do it or not
| Corala chapter 13 . 7/16
So will he do it or not
| SNHfvr chapter 14 . 7/11
I finally caught up. Thank you for sharing your story. hopefully there is no slash please and thank you.
| wandamarie chapter 14 . 7/9
Oh my getting good thanks for the story and chapter so far keep up the great work
| RainePhoebe chapter 14 . 7/7
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/6
Your dialogue has an odd quality to it. It's almost robotic, stiff, or formal. It's not how people really speak in casual conversations. I can picture Snape speaking in that manner, but not young teenagers.
Also, the story as a whole lacks detail. It's all dialogue and no narrative. Throw in a bit of detail, and slow things down a bit. You crammed three chapters worth of plot into one chapter-all because there's no detail.
Thirdly, you have a lot of typos and silly mistakes in your story. A lot of your punctuation is wrong or missing. As a whole, your story is very sloppily written. It reads like you slapped it together.
| thewolf74 chapter 14 . 7/6
Draco needs to cool his heels. Harry is new the the vampire thing. I am glad that he and Harry are getting along now. Please update soon...
| takingitinstride chapter 14 . 7/6
Absolutely love this story. I hope you will update soon and consistently
| Visitkarte chapter 14 . 7/6
Aww, poor Harry - he is driving himself in a frenzy. Severus is being lovely! Aww!
| ALiveTodaytoWrite chapter 14 . 7/5
| affleckfan08 chapter 14 . 7/5
I'm so glad you're updating this story! It's a great read and I can't wait to see where it goes!
| lilyflower101 chapter 14 . 7/5
Your a wonderful dad Severus.
| mandancie chapter 14 . 7/5
I was so happy to see that you've updated this story. ;D I have missed this so much. :D Awesome chapter as always. :D I can't wait to see what will happen next. :D Update as soon as you can. :D
| DarkRavie chapter 14 . 7/5
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
| RainCityWriter chapter 14 . 7/5
I liked this chapter, it shows the developing relationships well