Reviews for jealousy and anger mix well?
DefineAuthor chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
can you update please please please and that was good really good but can you do ian and cj to?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
i love ray x suki storys please wright more :) BTW i go to a boarding school in queensland and love to read your and any ray x suki storys when prep ( study is over )
Cabitha chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I think it's great, perhaps you should get a beta for grammar purposes though, there were a lot of uncapitalized I's and tense changes and I think a beta could help. But the story itself looks awesome
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Good as! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Keep writing your other one too!
bookbabe68 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Good sory but some of your capitalization could use a little work