he... Turians got there butt kicked!

Good chapter
By the way, why did the Turian say this:
"What? Why on earth are you engaging us?! Stand down immediately, this betrayal will not go unpunished."
Why did he say Earth?

I want to see their reactions to a mass firing of APBs from dreadnoughts, would love the "Dafuq?!" reactions!

love the story really looking forward to reading more :) dont like how it started with the human attacking first but that was very well done i appove.

You should bring in the Unas for the Krogan and I have a way to bring in the Tok'ra get DNA from a Goa'uld queen clone it and transfer a Tok’ra’s mind it like the Asgard

Too much dialogue. It would read better if you could cut some of it down.

"I can only assume that the Tau'ri have infiltrated the sector and are providing support."

"Just one thing Councilor. You had better hope that the Tau'ri aren't in the system or this could be a very short war."

This is slightly contradicting, isnt it? Otherwise nice chapter.

Damn...that was cool. Can't wait for the next chapter! *snicker* stupid turians...heh heh... D

Please demilitarize the Turians for this shit.

Please update again soon!

And the plot thickens. Valern continues to build bridged and move relations forward. Tevos is friendly and fairly open, but upset that Valern has the spotlight. Sparatus is still upset at loosing to the cosmic equivalent of a toddler, and takes rash action without thinking it through. I'm pretty sure that Turians don't actually want to engage the humans, and I know that humanity wants to avoid such a conflict. I don't know where you're planning on going with it, but I can easily imagine a Tau'ri-Krogan-Turian conflict developing into a Afghanistan/Vietnam style proxy war, at least for a little while. Or an awkward standoff. Or something.

Anyway, if you get stuck, you can always try to talk it out with someone.
As always, good luck on the story development, and I look forward to your next chapter.

well looks like Wrex made for an interesting entery, also interestig confesion that Valern made, while i liked it how Sparatus was pissed, well and the end there, but ah well great chapter once again well done, it could have been a bit longer

Excellent chapter

Cool

Nice look forward to more esp with how the asari are portrayed compared to normal with these encounters, feel they are almost like the tokra, wanting to do good but only as they can be the leaders and controllers