wow...this is bad. And you should feel bad writing this garbage.

I liked how Beckett prodded the Krogan on why they deserved to survive.

HC is overextending itself without commiting more personnel to Andromeda.

Since when do the SGC have Omni-tools?

The plan is what? To unleash the Krogan so that the citadel races can eat crow while the Tau'ri ride high laughing all the way? Why did the HV commit so much to an endeavour they could not be sure would reap dividends?

You've made the SG not just reckless but approaching malevolence.

Why would HC worry about the Council developing hyperdrives and shields? How would they even do so without Naquadah or Naquadria? Only the Asgard and Ancients had learned to generate enough power witout use of these substances.

SG involvement in this galaxy is becoming increasingly agressive, your doing a real number on their reputation and I have yet to see a genuine reason for all this aggression; except for its own sake.

Ireland, Switzerland and Sweden barely have a military to begin with, let alone a navy or an airforce. You're nuts if you think they could each build and sustain an interstellar craft of their own; even together it would be a stretch.

This whole scenario is highly contrived. Why would the SGC even care what aliens are doing in a galaxy absent of humans. Milky Way, Pegasus and the Ori home galaxy all had humans in desperate need. This is completely apart from that, meddling for meddling's sake.

So in a new galaxy the gung ho yank air force start a new war unnecessarily with there fancy Asgard/Ancient ships. Well its closer to a real portrayal of USAF than the Stargate show, but way off the mark in regards to the Stargate canon. Even caldwell and Ellis weren't shoot first ask questions later. Totallu pointless. If they are evn a little resourceful they'll notice the codex from their guests won't match that recovered from the ships.

Staging ground forfurther operations. Is your mind addled? SG Hyperdrives can fly clear across the galaxy in an hour. Holding the other side of the relay is absolutely pointless, it serves only to separate human forces.

You've made SG beligerent chumps and it is very grating.

That was bizarre. They've made alot of assumptions, too many for not knowing what exactly they were facing or what the situation is. The hubris in declaring we're the fifth race is proof these people don't desrve to be onboard Homeworld defence ships let alone in command of one.

I liked how the turians have been portrayed as competent in this chapter, many stories make them moronic.

very good and i dare say amazing story , i hope you can continue , and update soon this amazing story .

Why don't you try to rewrite it, with a plan?

Okay I don't really understand your plan with the CC folks but its pretty good storyline.

Sorry for my earlier outburst, I would feel ashamed but I don't, anywho thank you for clearing that up in real good time that you did.

Really, what the hell is that dude, ither Lehmon is a human first type person than I don't understand what the fuck you did (sorry for the swear word), now to me their should've done a protective type thing meaning protecting the civi ship with their SHIELDS, differently (couldn't spell the word I wanted, I hope that word is what I hope I think it means) what I would've done, if I was the Captain of a vessel. It could be the Star Trek thing to do to me at least.

Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)

Please make more

This pleases me, I wait for more.