Reviews for Looking Glass |
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![]() ![]() Please Kakashi don't blow it... ;( |
![]() ![]() Rin is awesome, and where's Obito is he alive, and are Rin and 'Kashi an item? Does Kakashi have Obito's eye still or does he only have one eye. |
![]() ![]() Thank you Minato for finally hugging him! |
![]() ![]() Great, Akatsuki is here to cause trouble, wonderful. (I mean that as if I were Sarutobi, not bad writing) |
![]() ![]() Oh Minato I just want to give you a really long hug, and also GIVE YOUR POOR UNLOVED CHILD A HUG SIR! Poor Minato. Longer chapters would be great, and I still want to know what's up with Kakashi's team. |
![]() ![]() I don't mind it not being a time travel fic, but I really want to know what's going on with Kakashi's team, RIN IS ALIVE! does that mean all of his team is there, or did Kakashi get snatched instead of Rin, I really want to know! |
![]() ![]() This is really well written, it reads like a proper book, which I haven't seen in fanfiction very much. I also like the plot so far. (applause and cheering) |
![]() ![]() Naruto had to go home |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder would you like to make the sekuel or another story like this? I am in love with your words. This story really amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing fic. I read this years ago and now I have returned to read it once again. It is very well written. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been a bazillion years since this was published and finished but I still feel the need to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. The premise was intriguing and though there are some loose ends (Pein in Minato's world for example), it was a really well written and good story. There aren't too many stories where naruto parents live that are good, but yours definitely is. The only thing I feel sorry about, though understandable is that Rin chose to go to "canon" Konoha. Honestly, imho they did nothing to deserve her, it never really sat well with me, how the village and the people Naruto's parents entrusted him to simply failed to treat Naruto the way he deserved and many of Sarutobi's actions are just plain unforgivable if you ask me, Hokage and duty to the village or not. Naruto's parents gave their lives to protect Konoha and the least Sarutobi's could have done was take proper care of their legacy instead of having Naruto "earn" the affection he shouldn't have had to achieve by himself in the first place. I know it was kind of necessary for Naruto's journey in canon and I do like the story as a whole, but from a humanistic viewpoint the message that you have to work hard and prove yourself to earn respect and love is somewhat messed up if you ask me. Anyway minirant over, I'm glad Naruto gets a happier life in your story, thank you for writing it, I hope you're doing well in life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a good story and complete too! I'm glad I found it. |
![]() ![]() I think Minato was too benevolent, not killing Konan, Nagato, and Hiruzen after even putting a genjutsu on Naruto, etc... |
![]() ![]() THIS STORY IS A WORK OF ART, PLEASE SOMEONE SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY IF THE GREAT AUTHOR-SAMA HAS NO TIME OR THE DESIRE TO DO IT... XD |
![]() ![]() Wonderful work!I'm glad everyone in this article is smart enough. Minato immediately guessed Naruto's identity, and so did everyone else. You know, they're not very smart in a lot of other novels. But I don't think Naruto should play pranks on people's homes if he's afraid of losing the precious kindness he never earned before. If Minato hadn't been his father, ruining someone's home would have been a nuisance. The ending is a kind of imperfect sadness, Naruto harvest the family, but he did not even say farewell to San daime Grandpa . Rin and her Kakashi also lost each other, this is a surprise for another Kakashi, but for Rin's Kakashi is a sudden disaster, I feel sorry for him. And Rin didn't even pack her things before she left,bring no mementos, and not even a last look at the face under Kakashi's mask. She didn't say goodbye to other friends, and didn't take a last look at the place where she had lived for so many years. After all, son is more important than student to Minato. |