brilliant a it of a sad end but still good

Doth mine eyes deceive me? UPDATE! OH GLORIOUS UPDATE!
One last chapter? Aww. Is there going to be an epilogue, at least?
Man there's so many issues. I want the fluff baaack. At the end, I mean. Because angst is totally cool right now.
Minato is scary... This side to him is so rarely seen that you often forget it's there.
It's sad that without Naruto in one world or the other, the cycle of hatred may never be resolved.
Rin or Naruto :'( I am counting on some other ingenius way to solve the dilemma.
Or if Rin does go to original Konoha... That could actually solve the whole problem with Obito, assuming he still lives in the original world.
Just do your best! I know it will be awesome.
I'm excited :D :D

thank you thank you thank you. i really love the update and cant wait for the ending.

can not await it

It was worth the wait. Its so good to see you back and now I have an excuse to go and read this story all over again XD
Not that I need one lol

Love it!~

SHRIEKING

yanno i lost all hope for this story's continuation aaaaaaaaa

But you updated! Yaaaaay!

I love the bit where - actually i just love all of it

I'm going to leave you a proper review when you finish. Honestly, I need to re read the old chapters to read this with proper comprehension. You seem to be close to the end and I sort of think I know where you're going, but yeah, I can't remember enough to not be largely lost reading this chapter today. Happy writing.

Not angry at all, just had to quickly review a few chapter previous. So happy you came back! I can't wait for the finale! XD

It's too bad, it could have been a good story... but the amount of deus ex machina (Konan's escape, for example) could redefine the term. That, plus the stupidity of the good guys really makes this difficult to read. The concept was good, but the execution, wow (and not in a good way). The grammar and punctuation, sentence structure, etc are very good, but the plot shows a lack of planning and flow.

good chap

Why would I be angry if there's a new chapter? I knew you would update at one point. I'm glad that Minato was successful in regaining control over both villages. Its good that Konan showed up and helped negotiate the retreat of Ame forces. Still that leaves the big question, will Rin exchange herself to keep Naruto with his father?

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next.

Ho. Ly. Fuck. It's been so fucking long omg I thought this fic was abandoned but now it's not? SQUEEEE!

:DDD

Yas. Keep it up ur amazing and I still love this fic!

like the chapter but you take way too long, lol. give me that next chapter already!