I hope naruto stays in this world

Ooh parallel worlds

I'm organizing all my saved fanfictions and thought I would finally review this one as it's one of my favorites. This is probably one of the most fun and well-written Naruto fanfics that involve traveling into a different dimension. Seeing Naruto building his bond with Minato is so precious. This fic didn't skimp on the action in either dimension, so it's fun in that sense too.

My only issue with this fic is Nagato and his people being able to figure out a seal for the mirror basically from the ground up since they only recovered a burned corner or whatever of the seal that Hiruzen used. I thought that was too much of a stretch and I wasn't really able to suspend my disbelief there. Plus, fuuinjutsu is supposed to be one of the toughest and least studied arts, so I can't imagine they had anyone on Jiraiya's level. It should've taken much longer. I think it would've been better if Nagato found some other way using his Rinnegan.

Other than that, though, this fic is really fantastic! The only thing I'm sad about is how Naruto never gets to really bond with the Kakashi from his original dimension. I just kind of feel sorry for OG Kakashi even though he does get to come back with Rin.

Sublty convincing

Awwww

So I spent the last few hours reading this, and I know chapter 25 is the end, but I totally wanna know what happens to Rin and Kakashi 2, and what happens with Naruto, Kakashi 1, and Minato.

Again, you really should write a sequel. Naruto has an entirely new life awaiting him, the fact he is a Jinchuriki is likely not going to stay secret, but he's also the Son of the Hokage and that means he isn't going to be quite as isolated.

With Itachi present I would say Itachi would end up being Naruto's sensei instead of Kakashi, with Kakashi ending up as Sasuke's sensei. Itachi is able to suppress the 9 tails and I'm guessing Yamato is an alternative.

Interesting start!

You really need to write a sequel, there are a lot of possible routes you can go with this story.
1. Naruto adjusting to his new life in the new Konaha and his story as he grows up since Akatski exist in this universe also. Who replaced Obito as Madara's underling?
2. Are the villains going to be the same or are they going to be different?

You left a lot open for future plotlines.

Now, that was different. Time/dimension fics are always interesting to read and here the concept is brilliant. When you mentioned the crystal ball Sandaime used to had on the early few chapter of Naruto as the reason for this dimensional cross, I was amazed. Because the two Hokages are known to love to make experiments, this is a great foundation for the two worlds to cross. I love Minato-as-Hokage fics because we need to see more of that and here he is also a Dad, a lovable dad. I need more interaction of this family. When Kakashi cross the dimension, I know some heartbreak situation is going to come but the bitter is still there when I read the last chapter yet it is understandable. An eye for an eye and all that. So this is great. A pack full of action and realistic story. Thank you so much for sharing!

Ohhhhhhhhh Kakashi is also transported omgggg

So Kakashi and Itachi sensed this?

Oh crap Pain

Oh...FREAK KAKASHI RUNNNNN

OH CRAP! WHO IS IT?!

Loved it. :)