Maybe Kakashi should have tried using a fire jutsu?

Well, I still think Sarutobi should havedestroyed the room and the crystal...

Why didn't he destroy the room ? And the crystal ? I mean, if he really wants Naruto to be safe, it's the best solution, no ?

I want so much to see a Kakashi-jiji update. You did him well.

Hello! Thanks You for finish your story. Sorry, I speaker a liiitleee English, but I want thankyou to you

This story was absolutely the best fanfic I've ever had everything I've always loved a strong and influential kakashi,naruto anime based drama,no OC's,violence,war,naruto receiving love and a family and a strong minato presence (not him being a ghost or reference). This story was well written and awesomely planned the mistakes i saw were easily over- looked and didn't disturb my reading at all. You are incredibly talented and this story is a testament to your great skill. If anyone can began a huge success from making stories I believe its share any other masterpieces used made on my email: naruto please and i prefer a kakashi one,but either way if you make it itll be on Random Flyer,rock on

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... They have 3 seal masters.. And they forget the most basic thing of restraining her with chakra seals? Complete drain?immobilizing her? Why do you keep concentrating on feelings and bullshit so much? I like to read them but this is a little too much you know.. It just keeps getting more and more frustrating...

I don't know why they would do this, they have 2 Konoha's, one of them weakened but still, repair the mirror and make an alliance, that way there's not a force in either world that can match them, and if a major attack should happen in one world, they can move to the other one.

This make no tactical sense, they are the best ally each other could ever wish for, sure it's unprecedented, but that's because world portals haven't been a thing before, but there's really no logical sense to keep the 2 worlds separated.

kinda sad you didn't kill pain. oh well. this story was okay.

It's been almost a year since you have completed this amazing fic but I feel compelled to review nonetheless. An altogether excellent story. I was hooked and emotionally invested and was torn between the two worlds - what would be the best resolution on both sides. While I am sad that Naruto will not grow into the same Naruto we know and love, I am still very happy he gets to grow up a lot happier than in his canon life. I was also so so so torn about the two Kakashi's and Rin. I love KakaRin but man this was very conflicting. But overall, I do think you tied all the loose ends well and finished the story with a satisfying ending that still leaves you wanting for more. Definitely one of my favourite Naruto fics!

This is an amazing story in every way. You made my heart melt, built great suspense, beautiful detail, and much more. It’ll definitely go down as one of the fan fictions I’ve enjoyed the most on this website (and any other).

I've noticed another difference and I'm sure that it will be better explained as the story progresses. Rin is alive. Now in cannon she was killed before the Kyuubi attack so I'm wondering what changed to cause that. Is Rin's survival the divergence in the timeline? It will be interesting to find out

Oh my G, I'm screaming! I love Daddy!Minato. Sadly those types of fics are tiresome because nothing ever goes wrong. At least in this one Minato has known loss and so has Naruto so it should bring some realism to the story

Yeah, I saw Rin going to Naruto's native Leaf a mile away. Predictable, and well...lame.